#IWSG – Changes

July 1, 2026 by Roland Clarke

For much of June, as in previous months, I’ve been concentrating on one writing project, so I haven’t posted anything here since June’s Insecure Writer’s Support Group post, Story Ideas.

However, over the last few days of June, family members and carers were packing up our belongings in our trailer home with some guidance from my wife and me. The last Saturday in June, we were moved by Viking Medical Transportation to our new home in Nampa. We have downsized from a two-bedroom home to a bedroom and bathroom in my wife’s second son’s new home, bought with some of the money from our house sale.

https://www.vikingmedicaltransportation.com/

We are now working out which belongings we can keep and where to put them. Some crucial items still need to appear, but they will eventually.

On the writing side, I’m slowly revising my North Wales police procedural, Fates Maelstrom. Having finished writing a chapter-by-chapter outline with improved plot lines, I can now return to editing, or rather revising, my 2018 draft.

My regular carer is a bit of a history buff and expressed interest in my Alternative History novel, Eagle Passage, so I’ve been revisiting that. Whenever I need the distraction of another project. I’m seriously considering revising my continuation of the Viking Age.

However, I can’t abandon my Ukraine saga, Freedom Flights, which remains on hold, probably until there is peace and an end to the horrendous war.

Slava Ukraini

Heroiam slava!

Every month, IWSG announces a question that members can answer in their IWSG posts. These questions may prompt you to share advice, insight, a personal experience, or a story. Include your answer to the question in your IWSG post or let it inspire your post if you are struggling with something to say.

July 1 question – Is there anything you’d like to see changed, added, and/or rearranged about the book publishing industry?

As I’m finishing this on the morning of July 1st, my answer will have to be extremely rushed. Can self-publishing be improved as an option?

Cover design by Jonathan Temples. Cover photo by Nick Perry.
https://rolandclarke.com/spiral-of-hooves/

Having only self-published the second edition of Spiral of Hooves, I know little about this publishing avenue. Rather than struggle to convince a publisher that I’m a valuable investment, I’m considering self-publishing, as many authors are taking that route. I know some of you are doing this successfully.

At the moment, there seem to be a lot of poorly written self-published books out there. So, the market is flooded, and it’s hard to stand out. The answers seem to be better self-editing and revision, plus a greater commitment to marketing one’s own books. Due to my health and declining time, I’m beginning to realise that writing, editing, and marketing will take up more time than I have remaining.

Strangely, one of my carers is a self-published writer of fantasy and erotica, using the pen name Kataya Moon. Her solution is to sell her books on multiple sites, offer editing services, and ‘moonlight’ as a carer. To me, that is not a viable career path in my twilight years.

Can the industry develop better self-publishing avenues, or is there already a sensible, viable, and inexpensive route available?

As one IWSG co-host has suggested elsewhere, it all comes down to marketability.

The awesome co-hosts for the July 1 posting of the IWSG are Rebecca Douglass, Ronel Janse van Vuuren, Cathrina Constantine, and Jacqui Murray!

Finally, don’t forget to visit other writers via the IWSG site for their invaluable insights on writing:

Insecure Writer’s Support Group

Let’s rock the neurotic writing world!

Our Twitter handle is @TheIWSG, and our hashtag is #IWSG.

Purpose: To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven for insecure writers of all kinds!

Posting: The first Wednesday of every month is officially Insecure Writer’s Support Group Day. Post your thoughts on your own blog. Talk about your doubts and the fears you have conquered. Discuss your struggles and triumphs. Offer a word of encouragement for others who are struggling. Visit others in the group and connect with your fellow writer – aim for a dozen new people each time – and return comments. This group is all about connecting!

#IWSG – Story Ideas

June 4, 2026 by Roland Clarke

As in previous months, I’ve been concentrating on one writing project, so I haven’t posted anything here since May’s Insecure Writer’s Support Group post, Feedback. Well, not since yesterday’s apologetic Not #IWSG keyboard delay, which explains that I’ve been struggling with my keyboard as well as my health, which is why I am posting this a day late.

Also, we are selling our trailer home and moving in with my wife’s second son towards the end of June, which has consumed some of our time. When I create space, my writing has focused on revising my North Wales police procedural, Fates Maelstrom. My answer to this month’s question will touch on its origin.

For those following my Ukraine saga, Freedom Flights, that project remains on hold, except I keep abreast of the ongoing war daily.

Slava Ukraini

Heroiam slava!

Remember, the question is optional!

June 3 question – Do most of your story ideas come from one place (the news, dreams, etc.) or do they hit from all over the place?

Mine hit from all over the place.

My current writing project is part of the Snowdon Shadows Mysteries, so I’ll start there. The clue is in the series title, as Snowdon is in North Wales. There are four books in the series, and all but one were inspired whilst living there. The main character, detective Sparkle Anwyl, appeared as a secondary character in the first draft of what was originally the first book, Fates Maelstrom, set on Dartmoor in the West of England. The plot grew from a conversation with a friend about police confusion when identical twins commit crimes.

Sparkle & Kama
Graphics by Jonathan Temples –
http://jonathantemples.co.uk/

I developed Sparkle through various short stories prompted by numerous suggestions, including some WEP/IWSG Challenges. As I assembled the stories, a linking plotline emerged, becoming Fevered Fuse, which chronologically is Book 1. Therefore, Fates Maelstrom is chronologically Book 2, so I’m writing a new outline to guide my current revision process. The inspiration for Book 3, Seeking A Knife, was research I did for my Blogging from A to Z Challenge 2015 theme of ‘The War of 1812’. Book 4, Ruined Retreat, arose from a retiree murder mystery suggestion from a neighbour in our residential park in North Wales.

The Norwegian Viking ship Draken Harald Harfrage sailing off Greenland – http://www.drakenexpeditionamerica.com

I wrote the first draft of my Alternative History novel, Eagle Passage, after I asked, “What would have happened if Leif Eriksson had settled Vinland permanently in 1000 AD?” In fact, I initially answered the question in an entry for an IWSG Anthology competition, though it wasn’t among the winning entries.

However, my World War II story Feathered Fire, appeared in the 2020 IWSG Anthology (No. 5), Voyagers: The Third Ghost and did lead to my present-day Ukraine saga, Freedom Flights. That IWSG Anthology competition theme inspired me to research Slavic mythology and World War II’s Night Witches.

Ideas for earlier writings were not just prompts but events, such as The Tevis Cup, the ‘Ultimate Horsemanship Challenge’, which became the spark for Tortuous Terrain, the sequel to Spiral of Hooves. My health has also inspired a few stories, including The Last Leaf, a fantasy novella whose main character suffers like me from MS, Multiple Sclerosis.

The awesome co-hosts for the June 3 posting of the IWSG areVictoria Marie Lees, Sarah Foster, Natalie Aguirre, andC. Lee McKenzie!

Finally, don’t forget to visit other writers via the IWSG site for their invaluable insights on writing:

Insecure Writer’s Support Group

Let’s rock the neurotic writing world!

Our Twitter handle is @TheIWSG, and our hashtag is #IWSG.

Not #IWSG keyboard delay

June 3, 2026 by Roland Clarke

I’m posting this in case I miss the Insecure Writer’s Support Group Monthly post deadline. Today’s excuse is that I’ve been struggling with my keyboard for over a month, on top of the ongoing health problems.

The problem is that my keyboard either doesn’t type keys or insists on typing multiple versions of the letter or number. The multiple versions are easier to edit. My solution has been to use dictation software. Initially, I was using Word’s built-in dictate add-on. Now I’m using the pro version of Wispr Flow, which I highly recommend.

If you’re after software dictation, Wispr Flow will give you a free month of Pro if you use a reference link from me. Send me a message with your email, and I’ll send you the link.

As I said above, my health is an additional problem, especially when I have problems speaking. Wispr Flow mistypes when I swallow my words, and carers can’t understand what I need.

I will post my proper reply to this month’s IWSG question as soon as I finish dictating and editing it.

The awesome co-hosts for the June 3 posting of the IWSG are Victoria Marie Lees, Sarah Foster, Natalie Aguirre, and C. Lee McKenzie!

Finally, don’t forget to visit other writers via the IWSG site for their invaluable insights on writing:

Insecure Writer’s Support Group

Let’s rock the neurotic writing world!

Our Twitter handle is @TheIWSG, and our hashtag is #IWSG.

#IWSG – Feedback

May 6, 2026 by Roland Clarke

As my regular followers must have noticed, I haven’t posted anything since April’s Insecure Writer’s Support Group post, Apology.

Fortunately, my health has improved, so I have been writing.

My writing has focused on revising my North Wales police procedural Fates Maelstrom. My answer to this month’s question makes my decision to focus my time here clearer.

For those following my Ukraine saga, Freedom Flights, that project is on hold, except I keep abreast of the ongoing war daily.

Slava Ukraini

Heroiam slava!

Remember, the question is optional!

May 6 question – What was the most inspiring feedback you received from readers, including agents, editors, and beta readers?

Although I’ve had some invaluable feedback during my writing career, I’m going to focus here on my Snowdon Shadows Mysteries, set in North Wales.

Last year, I finished Draft 8 of Fevered Fuse, which chronologically is Book 1. When my beta readers read Draft 3 in 2020, comments like ‘Overall, congratulations! You have a really fun character, location and story. It will be such a super fun book to read’, and more specific ones, inspired me to hone that draft over the next five years with a professional editor’s help.

However, Draft 8 garnered a mixed response from writer friends and the first rejection from a publisher. Confused, I stopped submitting the manuscript and began revising Fates Maelstrom, chronologically Book 2 of the Snowdon Shadows Mysteries. When I sent the first three revised chapters of ‘Fates Maelstrom’ to one of my original beta readers, her response encouraged me to focus on that book.

“…I’m enjoying those first three chapters—I feel so far like this is much more put together than FF [Fevered Fuse] was when I first saw it… So, I guess my feeling so far is that the series is worth going on with….”

I’ve finished revising the first fourteen chapters, but after reading a writing article, I realised my original Scrivener outline would lead me astray. Fortunately, I have a synopsis with updates added, plus extensive notes on the new potline. So, I’m writing a new outline to guide my revision process.

I did start posting the opening six chapters of Fevered Fuse, if anyone is interested in seeing where I might have gone wrong. The comments there make me realise FF still has a future, someday.

The awesome co-hosts for the May 6 posting of the IWSG are Jenni Enzor, Jemima Pett, Jamie of Uniquely Maladjusted but Fun, and Kim Lajevardi!

Finally, don’t forget to visit other writers via the IWSG site for their invaluable insights on writing:

Insecure Writer’s Support Group

Let’s rock the neurotic writing world!

Our Twitter handle is @TheIWSG, and our hashtag is #IWSG.

#IWSG – Apology

April 1, 2026 by Roland Clarke

As my regular followers must have noticed, I haven’t posted anything since March’s Insecure Writer’s Support Group post, Space Lunch.

Not only have my eye problems continued, but I’ve had severe head congestion, mainly in my sinuses and throat, creating terrible phlegm. This has made it hard to do anything except emergency work.

It’s been impossible to write or even clear my emails. Although I’ve made writing plans in my head, I’m unsure when I’ll post the next episode of my Ukraine saga, Freedom Flights.

Slava Ukraini

Heroiam slava!

Until the next complete post, I’ll just hand over to the IWSG information and pass on the optional question.

Remember, the question is optional!

April 1 question – If you have a playlist (or could put one together) that either gets you in the groove to write or fits with one of your books, what is it? What type of music or what songs?

The awesome co-hosts for the April 1 posting of the IWSG are Melissa Maygrove, Cathrina Constantine, Kate Larkinsdale, and Rebecca Douglass!

Finally, don’t forget to visit other writers via the IWSG site for their invaluable insights on writing:

Insecure Writer’s Support Group

Let’s rock the neurotic writing world!

Our Twitter handle is @TheIWSG, and our hashtag is #IWSG.

IWSG – Space Lunch

March 4, 2026 by Roland Clarke

Although I knew March’s Insecure Writer’s Support Group post was approaching, I’ve continued to have eye problems, which have made it hard to write or even clear my emails. So, I’ve delayed the next episode of my Ukraine saga, Freedom Flights.

Slava Ukraini

Heroiam slava!

Since my January IWSG post, I’ve been posting Fevered Fuse, the first of my Snowdon Shadows novels featuring Sparkle Anwyl, in serial form. Links to each post can be found via my updated Snowdon Shadows page on the left-hand sidebar. However, I’m postponing the next chapter for the same health reasons and, vainly, hoping for more feedback on my recent post, Serialise or Submit? My Recurring Dilemma.

However, I realise, after reading this invaluable post, that I’ve become appalling at visiting other writers’ sites. So, why should they visit me? Health could be a reason for my non-involvement, but there are others as well. I seem to have too little time and too many commitments… or is checking up on news from Ukraine and now Iran a distraction?

Before I answer this month’s question, some of you may be wondering about the strange post title, Space Lunch. In fact, the file is called ‘Space Launch’. Alongside my eye strain, I also have a keyboard that’s misbehaving, typing too many letters or missing them. I try using dictation software, but it also makes ‘misssteaks’ I must correct.

Yet Space Lunch sounds intriguing.

Remember, the question is optional!

March 4 question – What elements do you include in your book launch? Or what do you have in mind for your future book launch? Or what advice do you have to offer to others planning to launch a book?

Until I have another ready for release, my only published novel, Spiral of Hooves, remains my only launch. Initially, with the Kindle release on Monday, December 9th, 2013, by Spectacle Publishing, I concentrated on contributing posts to the website of other Spectacle authors whose books were released at the same. We also reciprocated by posting on each other’s sites.

Released on Monday, August 7th, 2017, the second edition was a chance to try a different approach with an online release day gathering involving author friends, one of whom, a published mystery writer, provided an endorsement for the back cover. I encouraged the other writers to talk about their writing and books. There were also competitions with prizes, including autographed copies of the novel.

Whenever I get to launch another novel, I’ll probably repeat the online book launch gathering, but I’ve seen more authors doing extensive book tours, including visits to other writers’ blogs for interviews or to post there.

I would advise fellow writers to look to more successful published writers than me, for instance, Jacqui Murray, author of the popular prehistoric fiction saga, Man vs. Nature. Her latest book in the saga, Balance of Nature, has just been released. In 2019, I joined her tour for Book 2 in the Crossroads trilogy, the second part of her engrossing saga.

So, Space Lunch is still intriguing. Any thoughts on what it is or where it’s being held or performed? Answers on a postcard or in the comments, please.

The awesome co-hosts for the March 4 posting of the IWSG are PJ Colando, Ronel Janse van Vuuren, and Natalie Aguirre!

Finally, don’t forget to visit other writers via the IWSG site for their invaluable insights on writing:

Insecure Writer’s Support Group

Let’s rock the neurotic writing world!

Our Twitter handle is @TheIWSG, and our hashtag is #IWSG.