#IWSG – Regrets

For much of July, as in previous months, I’ve been concentrating on the usual writing project, so I haven’t posted anything here since July’s Insecure Writer’s Support Group post, Changes.

Having moved house in the last few days of June into our new home in Nampa, Idaho,  we have been adapting from a two-bedroom home to a bedroom and bathroom in my wife’s second son’s new home, bought with some of the money from our house sale. As with our last house, we are still waiting for some items to reappear, especially paintings on the bare walls, to make our room seem more like home.

The UK might have a lower GDP than the US, but back there we were not being driven into poverty by medical bills. No wonder my heart is still in North Wales.

On the writing side, I’m slowly revising my North Wales police procedural, Fates Maelstrom. Having finished a chapter-by-chapter outline with improved plotlines, I continue to revise my 2018 draft. Except I already see too much talking and not enough action. Do I need another murder?

However, I can’t abandon my Ukraine saga, Freedom Flights, which remains on hold, probably until there is a just peace and an end to the horrendous war.

Slava Ukraini

Heroiam slava!

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Every month, IWSG announces a question that members can answer in their IWSG posts. These questions may prompt you to share advice, insight, a personal experience, or a story. Include your answer to the question in your IWSG post or let it inspire your post if you are struggling with something to say.

August 5 question – As a writer/author what is something you regret? Or something that you wish you’d done differently in your writing process?

Regrets, I’ve had a few, but then again, too few to mention…

Correction: I’ve got more than a few regrets, but I can’t list them all.

On the writing front, my biggest regret is starting too many projects and not finishing enough of them. I admit that part of the problem is getting crazy ideas and needing to turn them into a draft novel. Well, after publishing one novel, I produced ten draft novels and two incomplete drafts.

However, looking back, most of these have arisen out of NaNoWriMo. For too many years, I used this to create a new project every year, rather than returning to projects that had mileage. Here’s a chronological list to show the extent of the problem:

NaNoWriMo 2011  – THE LAST LEAF. Developed from an IWSG Anthology entry.

NaNoWriMo 2012 –  WYRM BLOOD. Sequel to a thriller penned in 2011.

NaNoWriMo 2013 – TORTUOUS TERRAIN. The sequel to my 2013 debut novel Spiral of Hooves.

NaNoWriMo 2015 – FATES MAELSTROM. Snowdon Shadows series Book 2. Started in 2012, then relocated to North Wales in November 2015.

NaNoWriMo 2016 – EAGLE PASSAGE. My Viking Alternative History developed from an IWSG Anthology entry.

NaNoWriMo 2017 – RUINED RETREAT. Snowdon Shadows series Book 4.

NaNoWriMo 2018 – FEVERED FEW short story collection now revised a year later.

NaNoWriMo 2019 – FEVERED FUSE. The revised version of ‘Fevered Few’, with a revamped title, an amended plot and new scenes. Snowdon Shadows series Book 1.

First Snow on Snowdon ~ Juanita Clarke

NaNoWriMo 2023 – FREEDOM FLIGHTS SHORTS Pre-Korean War

On November 2, 2022, I posted #IWSG – NaNoWriMo Challenge, which gives a different perspective on my NaNoWriMo outings. Earlier, in 2019, I also recorded my total word counts each year in Nano Notches.

It’s interesting looking back to realise how many draft novels I regret abandoning when another idea dragged me in a new direction. I even remember draft novels that weren’t NaNoWriMo projects – two, at least: 

Seeking A Knife’, Book 3 in the Snowdon Shadows series, which is incomplete and needs previous books to establish Sparkle Anwyl. ‘Wyrm Bait’ is the mystery that preceded Wyrm Blood, and I regret filing it away after detailed comments from a reputable and published British editor, who was positive while suggesting a logical approach to the rewrite.

What is my biggest regret… after leaving North Wales? Not promoting ‘Spiral of Hooves’ enough, so I’d choose to work on the sequel set partly in Idaho, ‘Tortuous Terrain’.

 While that’s difficult to fix, I can regret and revise Eagle Passage as an Alternative History with current themes woven into a Heroine’s Journey plotline which might be a more interesting sell than yet another police procedural that lacks action.

The Norwegian Viking ship Draken Harald Harfrage sailing off Greenland – http://www.drakenexpeditionamerica.com


Or am I totally wrong?  Or just getting distracted and confused?

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The awesome co-hosts for the August 5 posting of the IWSG are Shannon Lawrence, Diedre Knight, Liza, and Pat Garcia! 

Finally, don’t forget to visit other writers via the IWSG site for their invaluable insights on writing:

Insecure Writer’s Support Group

Let’s rock the neurotic writing world!

Our Twitter handle is @TheIWSG, and our hashtag is #IWSG.

Purpose: To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven for insecure writers of all kinds!


Posting: The first Wednesday of every month is officially Insecure Writer’s Support Group Day. Post your thoughts on your own blog. Talk about your doubts and the fears you have conquered. Discuss your struggles and triumphs. Offer a word of encouragement for others who are struggling. Visit others in the group and connect with your fellow writer – aim for a dozen new people each time – and return comments. This group is all about connecting!

#IWSG – Changes

For much of June, as in previous months, I’ve been concentrating on one writing project, so I haven’t posted anything here since June’s Insecure Writer’s Support Group post, Story Ideas.

However, over the last few days of June, family members and carers were packing up our belongings in our trailer home with some guidance from my wife and me. The last Saturday in June, we were moved by Viking Medical Transportation to our new home in Nampa. We have downsized from a two-bedroom home to a bedroom and bathroom in my wife’s second son’s new home, bought with some of the money from our house sale.

We are now working out which belongings we can keep and where to put them. Some crucial items still need to appear, but they will eventually.

On the writing side, I’m slowly revising my North Wales police procedural, Fates Maelstrom. Having finished writing a chapter-by-chapter outline with improved plot lines, I can now return to editing, or rather revising, my 2018 draft.

My regular carer is a bit of a history buff and expressed interest in my Alternative History novel, Eagle Passage, so I’ve been revisiting that. Whenever I need the distraction of another project. I’m seriously considering revising my continuation of the Viking Age.

However, I can’t abandon my Ukraine saga, Freedom Flights, which remains on hold, probably until there is peace and an end to the horrendous war.

Slava Ukraini

Heroiam slava!

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Every month, IWSG announces a question that members can answer in their IWSG posts. These questions may prompt you to share advice, insight, a personal experience, or a story. Include your answer to the question in your IWSG post or let it inspire your post if you are struggling with something to say.

July 1 question – Is there anything you’d like to see changed, added, and/or rearranged about the book publishing industry?

As I’m finishing this on the morning of July 1st, my answer will have to be extremely rushed. Can self-publishing be improved as an option?

Cover design by Jonathan Temples. Cover photo by Nick Perry.
https://rolandclarke.com/spiral-of-hooves/

Having only self-published the second edition of Spiral of Hooves, I know little about this publishing avenue. Rather than struggle to convince a publisher that I’m a valuable investment, I’m considering self-publishing, as many authors are taking that route. I know some of you are doing this successfully.

At the moment, there seem to be a lot of poorly written self-published books out there. So, the market is flooded, and it’s hard to stand out. The answers seem to be better self-editing and revision, plus a greater commitment to marketing one’s own books. Due to my health and declining time, I’m beginning to realise that writing, editing, and marketing will take up more time than I have remaining.

Strangely, one of my carers is a self-published writer of fantasy and erotica, using the pen name Kataya Moon. Her solution is to sell her books on multiple sites, offer editing services, and ‘moonlight’ as a carer. To me, that is not a viable career path in my twilight years.

Can the industry develop better self-publishing avenues, or is there already a sensible, viable, and inexpensive route available?

As one IWSG co-host has suggested elsewhere, it all comes down to marketability.

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The awesome co-hosts for the July 1 posting of the IWSG are Rebecca Douglass, Ronel Janse van Vuuren, Cathrina Constantine, and Jacqui Murray!

Finally, don’t forget to visit other writers via the IWSG site for their invaluable insights on writing:

Insecure Writer’s Support Group

Let’s rock the neurotic writing world!

Our Twitter handle is @TheIWSG, and our hashtag is #IWSG.

Purpose: To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven for insecure writers of all kinds!


Posting: The first Wednesday of every month is officially Insecure Writer’s Support Group Day. Post your thoughts on your own blog. Talk about your doubts and the fears you have conquered. Discuss your struggles and triumphs. Offer a word of encouragement for others who are struggling. Visit others in the group and connect with your fellow writer – aim for a dozen new people each time – and return comments. This group is all about connecting!

#IWSG – Story Ideas

As in previous months, I’ve been concentrating on one writing project, so I haven’t posted anything here since May’s Insecure Writer’s Support Group post, Feedback. Well, not since yesterday’s apologetic Not #IWSG keyboard delay, which explains that I’ve been struggling with my keyboard as well as my health, which is why I am posting this a day late.

Also, we are selling our trailer home and moving in with my wife’s second son towards the end of June, which has consumed some of our time. When I create space, my writing has focused on revising my North Wales police procedural, Fates Maelstrom. My answer to this month’s question will touch on its origin.

For those following my Ukraine saga, Freedom Flights, that project remains on hold, except I keep abreast of the ongoing war daily.

Slava Ukraini

Heroiam slava!

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Every month, IWSG announces a question that members can answer in their IWSG posts. These questions may prompt you to share advice, insight, a personal experience, or a story. Include your answer to the question in your IWSG post or let it inspire your post if you are struggling with something to say. 

Remember, the question is optional!



June 3 question – Do most of your story ideas come from one place (the news, dreams, etc.) or do they hit from all over the place?

Mine hit from all over the place.

My current writing project is part of the Snowdon Shadows Mysteries, so I’ll start there. The clue is in the series title, as Snowdon is in North Wales. There are four books in the series, and all but one were inspired whilst living there. The main character, detective Sparkle Anwyl, appeared as a secondary character in the first draft of what was originally the first book, Fates Maelstrom, set on Dartmoor in the West of England. The plot grew from a conversation with a friend about police confusion when identical twins commit crimes.

Sparkle & Kama
Graphics by Jonathan Temples –
http://jonathantemples.co.uk/

I developed Sparkle through various short stories prompted by numerous suggestions, including some WEP/IWSG Challenges. As I assembled the stories, a linking plotline emerged, becoming Fevered Fuse, which chronologically is Book 1. Therefore, Fates Maelstrom is chronologically Book 2, so I’m writing a new outline to guide my current revision process. The inspiration for Book 3, Seeking A Knife, was research I did for my Blogging from A to Z Challenge 2015 theme of ‘The War of 1812’. Book 4, Ruined Retreat, arose from a retiree murder mystery suggestion from a neighbour in our residential park in North Wales.

The Norwegian Viking ship Draken Harald Harfrage sailing off Greenland – http://www.drakenexpeditionamerica.com

I wrote the first draft of my Alternative History novel, Eagle Passage, after I asked, “What would have happened if Leif Eriksson had settled Vinland permanently in 1000 AD?” In fact, I initially answered the question in an entry for an IWSG Anthology competition, though it wasn’t among the winning entries.

However, my World War II story Feathered Fire, appeared in the 2020 IWSG Anthology (No. 5), Voyagers: The Third Ghost and did lead to my present-day Ukraine saga, Freedom Flights. That IWSG Anthology competition theme inspired me to research Slavic mythology and World War II’s Night Witches.

 Ideas for earlier writings were not just prompts but events, such as The Tevis Cup, the ‘Ultimate Horsemanship Challenge’, which became the spark for Tortuous Terrain, the sequel to Spiral of Hooves. My health has also inspired a few stories, including The Last Leaf, a fantasy novella whose main character suffers like me from MS, Multiple Sclerosis.

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The awesome co-hosts for the June 3 posting of the IWSG areVictoria Marie Lees, Sarah Foster, Natalie Aguirre, andC. Lee McKenzie!

Finally, don’t forget to visit other writers via the IWSG site for their invaluable insights on writing:

Insecure Writer’s Support Group

Let’s rock the neurotic writing world!

Our Twitter handle is @TheIWSG, and our hashtag is #IWSG.

Purpose: To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven for insecure writers of all kinds!


Posting: The first Wednesday of every month is officially Insecure Writer’s Support Group Day. Post your thoughts on your own blog. Talk about your doubts and the fears you have conquered. Discuss your struggles and triumphs. Offer a word of encouragement for others who are struggling. Visit others in the group and connect with your fellow writer – aim for a dozen new people each time – and return comments. This group is all about connecting!

Not #IWSG keyboard delay

I’m posting this in case I miss the Insecure Writer’s Support Group Monthly post deadline. Today’s excuse is that I’ve been struggling with my keyboard for over a month, on top of the ongoing health problems.

The problem is that my keyboard either doesn’t type keys or insists on typing multiple versions of the letter or number. The multiple versions are easier to edit. My solution has been to use dictation software. Initially, I was using Word’s built-in dictate add-on. Now I’m using the pro version of Wispr Flow, which I highly recommend.

If you’re after software dictation, Wispr Flow will give you a free month of Pro if you use a reference link from me. Send me a message with your email, and I’ll send you the link.

As I said above, my health is an additional problem, especially when I have problems speaking. Wispr Flow mistypes when I swallow my words, and carers can’t understand what I need.

I will post my proper reply to this month’s IWSG question as soon as I finish dictating and editing it.

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The awesome co-hosts for the June 3 posting of the IWSG are Victoria Marie Lees, Sarah Foster, Natalie Aguirre, and C. Lee McKenzie!

Finally, don’t forget to visit other writers via the IWSG site for their invaluable insights on writing:

Insecure Writer’s Support Group

Let’s rock the neurotic writing world!

Our Twitter handle is @TheIWSG, and our hashtag is #IWSG.

Purpose: To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven for insecure writers of all kinds!


Posting: The first Wednesday of every month is officially Insecure Writer’s Support Group Day. Post your thoughts on your own blog. Talk about your doubts and the fears you have conquered. Discuss your struggles and triumphs. Offer a word of encouragement for others who are struggling. Visit others in the group and connect with your fellow writer – aim for a dozen new people each time – and return comments. This group is all about connecting!

#IWSG – Feedback

As my regular followers must have noticed, I haven’t posted anything since April’s Insecure Writer’s Support Group post, Apology.

Fortunately, my health has improved, so I have been writing.

My writing has focused on revising my North Wales police procedural Fates Maelstrom. My answer to this month’s question makes my decision to focus my time here clearer.

For those following my Ukraine saga, Freedom Flights, that project is on hold, except I keep abreast of the ongoing war daily.

Slava Ukraini

Heroiam slava!

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Every month, IWSG announces a question that members can answer in their IWSG posts. These questions may prompt you to share advice, insight, a personal experience, or a story. Include your answer to the question in your IWSG post or let it inspire your post if you are struggling with something to say. 

Remember, the question is optional!

May 6 question – What was the most inspiring feedback you received from readers, including agents, editors, and beta readers?

Although I’ve had some invaluable feedback during my writing career, I’m going to focus here on my Snowdon Shadows Mysteries, set in North Wales.

First Snow on Snowdon ~ Juanita Clarke

Last year, I finished Draft 8 of Fevered Fuse, which chronologically is Book 1. When my beta readers read Draft 3 in 2020, comments like ‘Overall, congratulations! You have a really fun character, location and story. It will be such a super fun book to read’, and more specific ones, inspired me to hone that draft over the next five years with a professional editor’s help.

However, Draft 8 garnered a mixed response from writer friends and the first rejection from a publisher. Confused, I stopped submitting the manuscript and began revising Fates Maelstrom, chronologically Book 2 of the Snowdon Shadows Mysteries.  When I sent the first three revised chapters of ‘Fates Maelstrom’ to one of my original beta readers, her response encouraged me to focus on that book.

“…I’m enjoying those first three chapters—I feel so far like this is much more put together than FF [Fevered Fuse] was when I first saw it… So, I guess my feeling so far is that the series is worth going on with….”

I’ve finished revising the first fourteen chapters, but after reading a writing article, I realised my original Scrivener outline would lead me astray. Fortunately, I have a synopsis with updates added, plus extensive notes on the new potline. So, I’m writing a new outline to guide my revision process.

I did start posting the opening six chapters of Fevered Fuse, if anyone is interested in seeing where I might have gone wrong. The comments there make me realise FF still has a future, someday.

Sparkle & Kama
Graphics by Jonathan Temples –
http://jonathantemples.co.uk/

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The awesome co-hosts for the May 6 posting of the IWSG are Jenni Enzor, Jemima Pett, Jamie of Uniquely Maladjusted but Fun, and Kim Lajevardi!

Finally, don’t forget to visit other writers via the IWSG site for their invaluable insights on writing:

Insecure Writer’s Support Group

Let’s rock the neurotic writing world!

Our Twitter handle is @TheIWSG, and our hashtag is #IWSG.

Purpose: To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven for insecure writers of all kinds!


Posting: The first Wednesday of every month is officially Insecure Writer’s Support Group Day. Post your thoughts on your own blog. Talk about your doubts and the fears you have conquered. Discuss your struggles and triumphs. Offer a word of encouragement for others who are struggling. Visit others in the group and connect with your fellow writer – aim for a dozen new people each time – and return comments. This group is all about connecting!

#IWSG – Apology

As my regular followers must have noticed, I haven’t posted anything since March’s Insecure Writer’s Support Group post, Space Lunch.

Not only have my eye problems continued, but  I’ve had severe head congestion, mainly in my sinuses and throat, creating terrible phlegm. This has made it hard to do anything except emergency work.

It’s been impossible to write or even clear my emails. Although I’ve made writing plans in my head, I’m unsure when I’ll post the next episode of my Ukraine saga, Freedom Flights.

Slava Ukraini

Heroiam slava!

Until the next complete post, I’ll just hand over to the IWSG information and pass on the optional question.

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Every month, IWSG announces a question that members can answer in their IWSG posts. These questions may prompt you to share advice, insight, a personal experience, or a story. Include your answer to the question in your IWSG post or let it inspire your post if you are struggling with something to say. 

Remember, the question is optional!

April 1 question – If you have a playlist (or could put one together) that either gets you in the groove to write or fits with one of your books, what is it? What type of music or what songs?

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The awesome co-hosts for the April 1 posting of the IWSG are Melissa Maygrove, Cathrina Constantine, Kate Larkinsdale, and Rebecca Douglass!

Finally, don’t forget to visit other writers via the IWSG site for their invaluable insights on writing:

Insecure Writer’s Support Group

Let’s rock the neurotic writing world!

Our Twitter handle is @TheIWSG, and our hashtag is #IWSG.

Purpose: To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven for insecure writers of all kinds!


Posting: The first Wednesday of every month is officially Insecure Writer’s Support Group Day. Post your thoughts on your own blog. Talk about your doubts and the fears you have conquered. Discuss your struggles and triumphs. Offer a word of encouragement for others who are struggling. Visit others in the group and connect with your fellow writer – aim for a dozen new people each time – and return comments. This group is all about connecting!