WEP/IWSG December Challenge – Zvenigora Snow

First, many thanks to the WEP team for inspiring us writers to create more gems with their Challenges. My thanks too to IWSG for their participation, and to my fellow writers and readers for their support and encouragement. Without all of this, I wouldn’t have written as much.

For those who didn’t realize, this is the final WEP Challenge. However, this is not the end of my Ukraine posts as I intend to write more Freedom Flights episodes until we reach a just peace. But as some commentators are talking about a long war or an enforced peace that allows Putin to invade again when his forces are stronger, I may have been forced to cease writing if that’s three or more years.

However, I’ll be optimistic and plan to see this published. In case you missed the previous non-WEP/IWSG Challenge episode of Freedom Flights, titled Embedded, here’s the link: https://rolandclarke.com/2023/12/10/freedom-flights-episode-14-embedded/

Moving on to this month’s theme Over To You and ‘the movie that inspires’, I knew early on what the choice would be. Well, okay, it could have been my favorite film, as that would have fitted since one of the two leads is a pilot. That 1946 film is A Matter of Life and Death, released in the US as Stairway to Heaven: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/A_Matter_of_Life_and_Death_(film). I recommend the movie if you like classic fantasy-romances.

Official UK cinema poster for A Matter of Life and Death – Copyright: Eagle-Lion Films

However, the final scene of my February 2023 Challenge episode, Winds of Change, foreshadowed the movie I chose.: https://rolandclarke.com/2023/02/15/wep-iwsg-february-challenge-gone-with-the-wind/  

For those new to this ongoing creation, please note, that this present-day tale began with my World War II story Feathered Fire, which introduced the Chayka family from Ukraine and appeared in the 2020 IWSG Anthology (No. 5), Voyagers: The Third Ghost.

The current stories open with Episode 1, Rainbow Firebreak, for the WEP/IWSG April: Challenge: https://rolandclarke.com/2022/04/20/wep-iwsg-april-challenge-a-hard-rains-a-gonna-fall/.

Episode 2, Winged Woes, for the WEP/IWSG June Challenge:     https://rolandclarke.com/2022/06/15/wep-iwsg-june-challenge-please-read-the-letter/

Episode 3, Moonbeam Magic, for the WEP/IWSG August Challenge: https://rolandclarke.com/2022/08/17/wep-iwsg-august-challenge-moonlight-sonata/

Episode 4, Winged Death, for the WEP/IWSG October Challenge: https://rolandclarke.com/2022/10/19/wep-iwsg-october-challenge-thriller/

Episode 5, Soul Seeds, for the WEP/IWSG December Challenge: https://rolandclarke.com/2022/12/01/wep-iwsg-december-challenge-first-time-ever/ 

Episode 6, Swords to Ploughshares, to conclude the WEP/IWSG December Challenge and close 2022: https://rolandclarke.com/2022/12/10/swords-to-ploughshares/

Episode 7, Winter Resolution https://rolandclarke.com/2023/01/31/wep-iwsg-challenge-resolve/  This extra post leads into this month’s Challenge entry and included a plot event I foreshadowed in Part 6.

Episode 8, Winds of Change https://rolandclarke.com/2023/02/15/wep-iwsg-february-challenge-gone-with-the-wind/

Episode 9, Precious Relations, https://rolandclarke.com/2023/04/20/wep-iwsg-april-challenge-life-is-beautiful/  

Episode 10, Inception, https://rolandclarke.com/2023/06/12/freedom-flights-part-10-inception/ .

Episode 11, Shaped Encounters, https://rolandclarke.com/2023/06/23/wep-iwsg-june-challenge-close-encounters/ .

Episode 12, Chocolate Pots, https://rolandclarke.com/2023/08/16/wep-iwsg-august-challenge-chocolate-pots/

Episode 13, Masked Nemesis, https://rolandclarke.com/2023/10/18/wep-iwsg-october-challenge-masked-nemesis/

Episode 14, Embedded, https://rolandclarke.com/2023/12/10/freedom-flights-episode-14-embedded/

Blurb: The Witches family yearn to dispel their winter gloom with light… and snow.

Episode 15 – Zvenigora Snow

2023

Wednesday, December 6th – Dęblin Military Air Base, Lublin Voivodeship, Poland

F-16 jets in March over Poland. Training for Ukrainian pilots could take place there.
Credit: Lukasz Glowala/Reuters

Snow flurries blew across the runway outside the Night Witches’ office. Kalyna and Vasy watched the last F-16 trainer land.

Back at their desks, Vasy placed a conference call with their husbands in Canada. Within five minutes they were discussing Winter plans.

“We’re sorry not to be joining you for the Chayka Air Fundraiser Dinner,” said Kalyna. “Is Aliona expecting to raise as much as last year after the media switched focus to the Middle East and now Guyana Essequibo?”

“Hopefully,” said her husband Leonid. “Canadian-Ukrainians remain committed, as do the refugees. Aliona believes the two survivors from Sable Flight attending, Maryna Sobol and Katia Antonov, will raise awareness.”

“Let’s hope so,” said Vasy. “That’s crucial for 2024.” She paused before asking, “Who’s coming here for Christmas? You’re all invited.”

“Since our daughter Klara is with you, our family will come,” said Marcus, her husband. “But we haven’t persuaded Leonid’s brood yet.”

“First, there’s the fundraiser to organize.”

Vasy scribbled a note for Kalyna, then pointed at the time.

“Save your answer for tomorrow’s call. We have a double gathering now,” said Kalyna. “Instead of honoring Saint Nicholas, the patron saint of children, yesterday evening, the Witches are celebrating today as it’s also Ukraine’s Armed Forces Day.”

“Appropriate as we must defend our precious children,” added Vasy, “while Putin kidnaps hundreds from Eastern Ukraine, then brainwashes them.”

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Thursday, December 7th – Dęblin, Lublin Voivodeship, Poland

Mariyka and Sergei watched the snowflakes spiral in the cold air as they walked home.

“It’s hard to enjoy such natural beauty,” said Mariyka, “while a few hundred kilometers east of us, mud and blood are all our brave comrades live with.”

“When will the violence end?” asked Sergei. “How many more deaths?”

She let a snowflake melt on her palm.

“I hate to think… too many. This war drags on too long.” She let out a sigh, her breath freezing in the air. “I must do more. I fear Russia grinds ahead in this war of attrition.”

“But at what cost to my friends… to those I love? Putin doesn’t care what happens to Russia or Ukraine.”

Walking into the restaurant, Mariyka said, “Unless his empire rises from the ashes, even if that takes ten years of war—”

“—or a false peace during which he rearms.”

Her aunt came over from the bar. “Depressing thoughts for Hanukkah, when we should celebrate the triumph of light over darkness. We must be positive. Putin will be defeated, whatever faith we follow.”

Memories of Christmas Eve midnight mass in St. George’s Cathedral in Lviv, wrapped around Mariyka, as she and Sergei followed her aunt to where other guests waited.

 After Agnieszka lit the first candle on the Chanukiah, the family brought in Jewish food, including potato latkes and pastries.

Hanukkah table
– Author: MathKnight – https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/User:MathKnight

Sergei asked, “I’m not familiar with Hanukkah so please explain why your menorah candelabra has nine branches?”

“The eight-branched menorah or Chanukiah has a place for a ninth candle, the shammes,” said Agnieszka. “As I just did, the ninth is used to light the others… one on this first night of Hanukkah, and an additional candle is lit on each successive night until, on the eighth night December 14, the Chanukiah is fully illuminated.”

“Many thanks,” said Sergei. “It’s fascinating how many festivals of light are held this time of year. Like December 13th is St. Lucia’s Day—”

“—which used to occur on the shortest day. Hence the saying ‘Lucy light, Lucy light, shortest day and longest night’,” said Mariyka.

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Friday, December 8th – Dęblin Military Air Base, Lublin Voivodeship, Poland

A MiG-29 Fulcrum takes off from Starokostiantyniv Air Base, Ukraine, Oct. 9 as part of the Clear Sky 2018 exercise. The exercise promotes regional stability and security, while strengthening partner capabilities and fostering trust. (U.S. Air National Guard photo by Tech. Sgt. Charles Vaughn)

The overnight wind had swept sparkling snowdrifts against the Engineering Hangar. By floodlight, the cadets cleared the drift blocking the main door, ensuring another refurbished MiG-29 could be moved outside later.

“Who will be test-flying the plane today?” asked Daria. “Not that I’m judging our rebuilds.”

Anzhela Havrylyuk and her chief mechanic, Larisa Kovalyov, appeared out of the darkness.

“Nor are any of the squadron. Every MiG-29 you’ve rebuilt has flown better than new. Larisa is just here for her normal flight check.”

The group moved further inside as more mechanics and cadets arrived.

“How many more MiGs are we scheduled to rebuild this month,” asked Maja.

Her colleague Nadzieja checked on the Planner board. “One, if the holidays disrupt our usual two per month.”

One cadet moved towards them, shaking her head.

“Am I wrong to worry when the head of Poland’s National Security Bureau warns Russia could attack Eastern NATO countries after Ukraine?” asked Klara Holub. “Should we prepare for that confrontation over the next three years?”

“I suspect we will,” said Master Engineer Anatol Krakarth. “Not just Poland, but also the three Baltic nations, plus Finland and others bordering Russia. The initial German report said NATO should plan for six to 10 years, but it’s wiser to be ready sooner.”

“But for Ukrainians,” added Anzhela. “We must survive this winter, and then a year at least with decreasing allied support. A year ago, we could dream of the F-16s some of us are training on. Now, this squadron may still be relying on these refurbished MiG-29s in 2024.”

Larisa threw her arms around her dejected partner. “We must remain positive. Remember today is the Feast of the Immaculate Conception. At Mass tonight, we should pray for peace and justice everywhere.”

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Monday, December 11thZvenigora Restaurant, Dęblin, Lublin Voivodeship, Poland

Fairy lights danced around Zvenigora Restaurant, snow crystals adding to the magic. The Witches shook powdery whiteness from their boots as they went inside.

“Can we put aside all our winter dread tonight?” asked Vasy, putting an arm around her daughter Klara. “It’s depressing enough learning about more truckers blockading the borders.”

“All supply problems and infrastructure attacks were dismissed in the doorway,” said Kalyna.

“For beautiful snowscapes and the arrival of our imagined 200 Gripen jets,” said Anzhela, walking over to a movie poster with Cyrillic script. “Last year, I forgot Zvenigora was a silent film by Ukrainian director Alexander Dovzhenko, which we saw when we were students.”

Mariyka smiled, tears in her eyes. “My murdered mother said our posters held a clue. Can you remember anything about the film?”

“Though fragmented, wasn’t there a legend about treasure buried in Mount Zvenigora?” replied Anzhela. “Around scenes blending industrialization and the beauty of the Ukrainian steppes.”

“It re-told ancient myths, I remember,” added Larisa. “One of the first films we saw together. When snow brought peace on earth.”

Poster for the 1928 Soviet Ukrainian film Zvenigora, by Alexander Dovzhenko.

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Slava Ukrayini

As a classic Ukrainian film blending a mix of elements, I felt ‘Zvenigora‘ worked as an ideal and unusual name for my fictional restaurant. Here are a few links:

https://www.imdb.com/title/tt0019611/

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zvenigora

Other links relating to this episode:

Perun on War Exhaustion: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pIKiFAKMoi0

2023 Guayana Esequiba crisis: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/2023_Guayana_Esequiba_crisis

For other posts in the Over To You WEP/IWSG December Challenge visit:

https://writeeditpublishnow.blogspot.com/2023/11/wep-december-challenge-over-to-you.html

Freedom Flights: Episode 14 – Embedded

In October, I posted my most recent WEP/IWSG Challenge episode, Masked Nemesis. Below you will find the next episode, Embedded, which I wrote as the first part of my 2023 NaNoWriMo entry. For the rest of that entry, I wrote three more Freedom Flights episodes Forest Elusion, Prairie Pride, and Saskatoon Sunrise – set respectively in 1944, 1947, and 1950. These are the first of the stories linking my original WWII story Feathered Fire and my ongoing present-day episodes.

For those new to this ongoing creation, please note, that this present-day tale began with my World War II story Feathered Fire, which introduced the Chayka family from Ukraine and appeared in the 2020 IWSG Anthology (No. 5), Voyagers: The Third Ghost.

The current stories open with Episode 1, Rainbow Firebreak, for the WEP/IWSG April: Challenge: https://rolandclarke.com/2022/04/20/wep-iwsg-april-challenge-a-hard-rains-a-gonna-fall/.

Episode 2, Winged Woes, for the WEP/IWSG June Challenge:     https://rolandclarke.com/2022/06/15/wep-iwsg-june-challenge-please-read-the-letter/

Episode 3, Moonbeam Magic, for the WEP/IWSG August Challenge: https://rolandclarke.com/2022/08/17/wep-iwsg-august-challenge-moonlight-sonata/

Episode 4, Winged Death, for the WEP/IWSG October Challenge: https://rolandclarke.com/2022/10/19/wep-iwsg-october-challenge-thriller/

Episode 5, Soul Seeds, for the WEP/IWSG December Challenge: https://rolandclarke.com/2022/12/01/wep-iwsg-december-challenge-first-time-ever/ 

Episode 6, Swords to Ploughshares, to conclude the WEP/IWSG December Challenge and close 2022: https://rolandclarke.com/2022/12/10/swords-to-ploughshares/

Episode 7, Winter Resolution https://rolandclarke.com/2023/01/31/wep-iwsg-challenge-resolve/  This extra post leads into this month’s Challenge entry and included a plot event I foreshadowed in Part 6.

Episode 8, Winds of Change https://rolandclarke.com/2023/02/15/wep-iwsg-february-challenge-gone-with-the-wind/

Episode 9, Precious Relations, https://rolandclarke.com/2023/04/20/wep-iwsg-april-challenge-life-is-beautiful/  

Episode 10, Inception, https://rolandclarke.com/2023/06/12/freedom-flights-part-10-inception/ .

Episode 11, Shaped Encounters, https://rolandclarke.com/2023/06/23/wep-iwsg-june-challenge-close-encounters/ .

Episode 12, Chocolate Pots, https://rolandclarke.com/2023/08/16/wep-iwsg-august-challenge-chocolate-pots/

Episode 13, Masked Nemesis, https://rolandclarke.com/2023/10/18/wep-iwsg-october-challenge-masked-nemesis/

Episode 14 – Embedded

2023

Wednesday November 1stZvenigora Restaurant, Dęblin, Lublin Voivodeship, Poland

It was still dark when Mariyka and Sergei finished cleaning the dining area of the restaurant after the successful Veles celebrations.

“You must have time for breakfast,” said her sister Sabina from the doorway into the kitchen, which she and Aunt Agnieszka had been cleaning. “We’ve made enough pancakes to feed a room of cadets.”

Hearing a knock at the front door, Mariyka checked.

It was her chief mechanic, Dariya Boyko, with the journalist writing about the squadron.

“Jane Wetherby wanted to talk before you’re needed in the Engineering hangar.”

“Let’s chat over breakfast with my family.”

“Perfect. I’d hoped they were here as well.”

Once they were all seated with plates of food and everyone was introduced, Jane took out her notepad.

“Do you all feel it’s brave and necessary for a woman like Mariyka to serve in a front-line unit?’

“Of course,” said Agnieszka. “As brave and important as the men. But as her aunt, I worry every time she flies in combat… as we all do.”

“Braver than men like me,” said Sergei. “But as a Russian, I surrendered, unwilling to fight. Now I can admire my partner Mariyka instead.”

Jane let the others express their admiration, then asked another question.

“Mariyka, I believe your family is part Jewish. Do you have relations in Israel, who might be involved in the war?”

“Yes,” replied Agnieszka. “Some cousins, who left Poland in 1993 and still live there—”

“—and like me, one was a pilot… but she was killed… fighting for a cause they believed in,” added Mariyka. “Dare we believe Hamas doesn’t want the destruction of Israel. Nor Putin ours.”

Sabina nodded. “Let’s pray neither war escalates, and more innocent lives are lost.”

“Unfortunately, with thousands already dead in Gaza,” said Dariya, “fatalities in Ukraine no longer provoke concern. The world’s focus has shifted away from us.”

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 Saturday, November 11th – Unbroken National Rehabilitation Center, Lviv, Ukraine

“Kapitan Sobol, I wish you a steady recovery. Do you miss the squadron?” asked Jane Wetherby.

Maryna squeezed her fellow survivor Katia’s hand. “My flight sisters… who died especially. And the ground crew who tried to save them. Lives lost. So many casualties everywhere. My precious Bohdana. Why?”

“Freedom,” said Katia. “Isn’t that why we fight? Except some of our allies forget that I fear.  Are we still fighting for Ukraine and Canada? Or just our ancestral motherland?”

“How many of you Witches were born in Canada?”

Maryna closed her eyes, letting Katia answer.

“Seven… less our two late sisters, who joined along with us. Whether other Canadian-Ukrainians become Witches depends on how this war is reported.”

Dropping her head, Jane paused before saying, “I hope my article helps. Where has the West failed Ukraine?”

“Supplying key weapons too late,” said Maryna. “Like ATACMS and cluster munitions. It’s exactly a year since Kherson was liberated yet we should have progressed further since then. We needed those weapons before our counter-offensive. Our brave forces have managed a multi-prong approach. But NATO doctrine recommends combined arms, an air-land campaign… when the right weapons are available. We are fighting an enemy NATO never has.”

“Without them, shaping operations were a slow tough grind,” added Katia. “Did our allies expect a swift assault while they delayed? We need better mine clearance and electronic measures. Only now are we being allowed to train on F-16s. Can Ukraine survive until the promised jets arrive?”

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F-16 jets in March over Poland. Training for Ukrainian pilots could take place there.
Credit: Lukasz Glowala/Reuters

Friday, November 17th – Dęblin Military Air Base, Lublin Voivodeship, Poland

“F-16s alone will not ensure our victory,” said Maksym Bondarenko, “but they will be a factor. We must convince our allies of the pressing need for their unwavering support.”

“Until the F-16s arrive, our engineering team will keep rebuilding and upgrading MiG-29s,” added Anatol Krakarth.

Mariyka nodded in agreement.

Jane looked at the group gathered in the squadron’s office.

“If your allies propose a peace plan, what form must that take?”

“It can’t allow Russia to keep any Ukrainian territory,” replied Maksym. “Including Crimea.”

“So, no peace that allows them to invade again,” added Vasy. “Difficult but crucial.”

“There must be a means to include reparations,” said Kalyna. “We can’t expect the West to cover all the costs of rebuilding what the Russians have destroyed.”

Jane held up her hands. “Possibly controversial, considering the heated discussions currently over the legality of using seized Russian assets. So, how dependent is victory on the extent of Western fatigue and further delays in support?”

“Extremely,” said Mariyka. “I fear what this winter might bring. Yet I know we must keep believing and doing everything we can to press forward.”

“And hope the crisis within US politics doesn’t favor Putin,” added Vasy.

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Tuesday, November 21st – Dęblin, Lublin Voivodeship, Poland

The images on the screen might be ten years old, but everyone watching had vivid memories of Euromaidan on this Day of Dignity and Freedom. Even the Canadians since they all had Ukrainian ancestry, especially the cousins Kalyna and Vasy, whose grandmothers had escaped Stalin’s tyranny in 1944.

Euromaidan in Kyiv – Photo: Evgeny Feldmanhttps://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Euromaidan_03.JPG

“Were your grandmothers alive to witness Putin’s invasion of Crimea the following year?” asked Jane.

“Both were,” replied Vasy. “The one I’m named after was doing great at 82, while Kalyna’s was as spry at 92. They were comparing Putin to Stalin, yet still optimistic after the Euromaidan events.”

“Were you tempted to come here and help?”

“Tempted yes,” said Kalyna. “But we were still serving in the RCAF. Although at 42, we were thinking of retiring. Four years after Crimea we did when we were unofficial guests at Clear Sky 2018 hosted by Starokostiantyniv air base.”

Jane turned her attention to the Ukrainians in the Witches’ office.

“Did any of you take part in the Euromaidan demonstrations?”

“I was on leave from the Airforce,” said Maksym. “In Kyiv, where my family lived, before we moved to Lviv. I was meant to remain loyal to the government, yet I felt torn. So, I went to Maidan Nezalezhnosti on that first day and realized from all the speeches, that our country needed to be free of the old Soviet ties.”

“How long did you remain in the central square?”

“A few hours at first. But I returned every day I was on leave, doing what I could to support the protestors. Mainly with food and first aid, although back then I didn’t join a Maidan Self-Defense unit. If I wasn’t a serving officer, I’d have joined. Unfortunately, when the Crimea invasion happened, the armed forces proved too late to respond.”

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Saturday November 25th – Dęblin, Lublin Voivodeship, Poland

The Hall of Memory and to the Black Board Alley
– Author: Kiyankahttps://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/National_Museum_of_the_Holodomor-Genocide

Moonlight cast shadows beside the Witches and their colleagues as they gathered for the remembrance ceremony on the 91st anniversary of the devastating 1932-33 famine in Ukraine.

“Why is it known as the Holodomor?” asked Jane, as they all prepared to light memorial candles.

“It means ‘death by hunger’ as an estimated 7 million Ukrainians died,” replied Vasy as her husband clutched her hand.

Marko explained. “I was privileged to know Vasy and Kalyna’s grandmothers, who escaped Ukraine after their parents died—”

“—of starvation in Stalin’s famine,” added Kalyna’s husband Leonid.

With respectful reflection, everyone lit their candles. Then in their flickering light, observed a minute of silence remembering the victims.

As they returned to the airfield, Mariyka and Agnieszka invited everyone back to the Zvenigora Restaurant for a final act of remembrance and food.

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Inside the family lit candles on every windowsill.

Maryka explained. “The tradition of ’Candle in the Window’ was suggested by Holodomor researcher James Mace in 2003, saying ‘Even seven decades later, a candle that flickers in the window seems to me to be a worthy reply’. We do this every year.”

“Even more relevant when Putin is again using hunger as a weapon,” added her sister.

“A weapon affecting people already near starvation in other countries,” said Nadzieja Chlebek. “Like the majors, I have family who suffered during Holodomor. My great-grandfather lost his parents in 1932.”

“Although I trained to fly in Canada. my family are originally Polish-Ukrainian,” said Adriana Pavlenko. “And I grew up learning about the suffering of millions over those decades.”

Jane kept making notes, then said, “Sending drones on the eve of Holodomor to attack Kyiv adds to the affront.” She continued, asking, “Has it ever been suggested that the squadron gets sent to guard the alternative grain route to the Black Sea.”

“Not yet,” said Kalyna. “For now, it’s either ground defenses or planes stationed nearer the Danube River ports.”

“But as long as Russia threatens any sensible grain deal,” added Leonid, “this is genocide against Ukraine and others. Yet one of many war crimes they must be held accountable for.”

“And your father, Vasy,” said Marko, “is attempting to pursue some of the children Russia has kidnapped from Eastern Ukraine.”

“As we often say, unpunished evil grows like cancer,” added Agnieszka. “Poland’s prime minister Mateusz Morawiecki last year said, “If we allow Putin to continue, he will become the Stalin of the 21st century,”

Slava Ukrayini

The next Freedom Flights episode will be the final WEP/IWSG Challenge of 2023, Over To You, which allows us to choose a film that inspires our post… so, I understand. I aim to have something up in the next 24 hours. The clue to the film hangs in a restaurant.

https://writeeditpublishnow.blogspot.com/2023/11/wep-december-challenge-over-to-you.html

#IWSG – Book Review

This month’s piece for the Insecure Writer’s Support Group post is again a challenge because of the problems arising from my bedridden state, especially my injured leg… although it is healing.

Meanwhile, during November, I first managed to write my next present-day Ukraine story, titled Embedded, which I will post before the WEP/IWSG flash due by December 15th.

I also took part in NaNoWriMo, writing Embedded, and some more Ukraine historical stories to fill part of the period between 1944 and 2022. The proposed Freedom Flights collection will open with my 1944 World War II story Feathered Fire, which introduced the two Ukrainian Chayka sisters and appeared in the 2020 IWSG Anthology (No. 5), Voyagers: The Third Ghost.

I managed to write three stories showing how the Chayka sisters reached the West, settled in Canada, and then helped found the aviation business, which will lead two of their granddaughters to fight for their motherland from 24th February 2022 onwards.

My December flash will be my final 2022-23 WEP/IWSG Challenge, as sadly there will be no more Challenges. Many thanks, WEP team for all the writing inspiration over the years I have taken part in your Challenges.

However, I intend to continue writing episodes until, I pray, a just peace with reparations has been reached. Then, that will be a perfect conclusion to the Freedom Flights collection.

Congratulations to everyone else who rose to the NaNoWriMo Challenge in November 2023.

Slava Ukrayini

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Every month, IWSG announces a question that members can answer in their IWSG post. These questions may prompt you to share advice, insight, a personal experience, or story. Include your answer to the question in your IWSG post or let it inspire your post if you are struggling with something to say. 

Remember, the question is optional!

December 6 question: Book reviews are for the readers. When you leave a book review do you review for the Reader or the Author? Is it about what you liked and enjoyed about your reading experience, or do you critique the author?

The short answer is my reviews tend to be for the reader and refer to my reading experience.

However, I also give each book a star rating: E.G:- Story – five stars; Setting/World-building – five stars; Characters – five stars; Authenticity – five stars; Structure – five stars; Readability – five stars; Editing – five stars.  This gives me more flexibility in the body of the review to explore different elements, including critiquing the author, constructively.

I lean toward guiding the reader as to choosing good reads, although making it clear I have genre preferences. Therefore, my reviews tend to be reader-centric, with additional comments that could help the author.

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The awesome co-hosts for the December 6 posting of the IWSG are C. Lee McKenzie, JQ Rose, Jennifer Lane, and Jacqui Murray!

Finally, don’t forget to visit more active writers via the IWSG site:

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Let’s rock the neurotic writing world!

Our Twitter handle is @TheIWSG, and our hashtag is #IWSG.

Purpose: To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven for insecure writers of all kinds!


Posting: The first Wednesday of every month is officially Insecure Writer’s Support Group day. Post your thoughts on your own blog. Talk about your doubts and the fears you have conquered. Discuss your struggles and triumphs. Offer a word of encouragement for others who are struggling. Visit others in the group and connect with your fellow writer – aim for a dozen new people each time – and return comments. This group is all about connecting!