Another month has passed, so it’s time for another Insecure Writer’s Support Group post, and an opportunity to tweak my writing strategy.
First, it’s been over three months since I submitted my Snowdon Shadows police procedural, Fevered Fuse, to London-based publisher Joffe Books. As expected last month, I never received an answer, so that is a firm rejection. Their website says, ‘Do not be disheartened if you don’t hear from us. What is not right for us may be exactly what another publisher is seeking. We encourage you to look for other opportunities to publish elsewhere.’
I’m not disheartened, I’m just disappointed to wait three months for this rejection from my first choice. Months ago. I began checking out other publishers by listening to a few of their authors’ books, and I made a short wish-list of small publishers. The second on my list, based in New York, answers within two weeks (and the third, an LGBTQ+ publisher, in 16 weeks). Unfortunately, another UK small publisher only considers fiction from UK-based writers, not UK-based fiction.
However, before I submit ‘Fevered Fuse’ again, I need to know if the manuscript is unpublishable (as it stands). Or perhaps, I would be best to revise another novel, such as ‘Fates Maelstrom’, the second book in my Snowdon Shadows series, which reads better than ‘FF’. But not up to the same standard as the audiobooks I listen to.
I worry that I’m kidding myself about being a writer, even if I’ve just posted another episode of my Ukraine saga, Freedom Flights. If you manage to read Winter Warning, there’s a question to answer, but only if you want.
Obviously, I’m also still following the news from Ukraine.
Slava Ukraini
Heroiam slava!
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August 6 question – What is the most unethical practice in the publishing industry?
Therefore, this abuse of copyright and the reasoning behind it, training AI, must rank as the most insidious and unethical practice. Closely followed by using AI to write books, thus flooding the market at the expense of real writers, depriving them of income.
I don’t think it’s unethical, as I realise publishers are overstretched, but knowing why a manuscript is rejected would be helpful. I guess multiple rejections mean ‘time for me to write something different’. Or stick to reading a book. 😉
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Episode 40 of Freedom Flights features a crucial annual event in the Night Witches’ and Chayka Air’s calendar. Or rather, the clear up before the event. The episode was becoming too long to add more scenes. Can you tell what will happen next, or do you need a Part 2 before Episode 41, which will be set in January 2025? I am planning to reference key events in this episode, rather than ignore any vital details.
Apologies if I’ve left gaps previously. If I have, please let me know.
I will continue trying to foreshadow future incidents without making my characters react as if they know what will happen in 2025… even if they fear what could happen. Also, I want each episode to tackle just crucial incidents in a specific month, thereby I hope to reach the present quicker. I don’t want to be stuck writing about earlier months when the last shot is fired.
Therefore, until a just and lasting peace for Ukraine is reached, I will continue to write more episodes. After then addressing the essential rebuilding, I must finish writing the pre-2022 growth of the Chayka Family and their aviation business based in Canada, Chayka Air.
We must never forget the brave people fighting for freedom, with too many losing their lives. Let’s pray Western aid and weapons continue to reach Ukraine, despite how some leaders vacillate. Assistance must arrive on time to change their fortunes and prepare for the genuine peace that must come soon.
Links to the previous episodes can be found on my Freedom Flights page via the left-hand sidebar.
Episode 40. Winter Warning.
2024
Monday, December 16th – Squadron Command Centre, Chayka Field, Volyn Oblast, Ukraine
Kalyna and Vasy Chayka studied the squadron personnel list in the Command Centre.
“We must decide who we’re sending to Canada for the Christmas Chayka Air Fundraiser,” said Kalyna. “What are our priorities this year?”
“At our meeting last month on defensive measures, we made an extensive list,” said Vasy. “Some items are in the pipeline, but others are outstanding. Most of all – personnel.”
“Our journalist friend, Aaron Garcia, recruited medics recently… and one K9 unit. Could he raise the security personnel? Or is he going home again?”
“Not if it means leaving Conchita Gutiérrez,” replied Vasy. “I thought Andżelika and Estera Sówka, as they are the First Lieutenants in charge of our security… the Night Owls.”
“Excellent. The Sówka sisters understand our security requirements. However, the Kearneys also want a Ukrainian pilot on their podcast. Someone who can inspire all our supporters. Their coverage is always invaluable.”
“Who do you have in mind?”
“Pilots who have flown combat missions. I’ve narrowed those down to two… both recovering from injuries.”
“Master Sergeant Polina Melynk is off duty, as is Lieutenant Olha Tkachuk. Whether our doctor feels Olha has adapted to her prosthesis well enough to travel is one question we need answered.”
“We can check about both pilots,” said Vasy, messaging Sacha Proulx.
*
Medical Centre, Chayka Field, Volyn Oblast, Ukraine
Doctor Sacha Proulx and Chief Paramedic Osinniy were discussing general medical issues when the Chayka majors arrived as arranged.
“Many thanks for sparing the time,” said the cousins in unison.
“We’ve discussed our two patients,” said Sacha. “Both have recovered, although neither is ready for active duty. Lieutenant Olha Tkachuk had more serious injuries, but it’s been over four months since her prosthetic left arm was fitted on July 16th. Even the second prosthesis fitting was over six weeks ago. Olha is fit enough to fly to Canada.”
Osinniy continued, “Master Sergeant Polina Melynk was wounded on Tuesday, September 3rd, so would be healthy enough physically to travel. But she isn’t managing to handle her mental recovery. She needs more psych sessions, rather than a long journey and press attention.”
The cousins nodded, and Kalyna replied.
“If Olha agrees with your assessment and feels ready for such a protracted trip, we will send her and two others as the Night Witches’ representatives fundraising in Canada.”
Sacha handed her some printouts.
“These are guidelines for Olha, concerning travelling abroad with a prosthesis, although she is aware of almost everything. Flying as a pilot is more demanding than flying as a passenger. We’ve also included documents to ensure that there are no problems at security checkpoints, especially regarding medical questions.”
**
Friday, December 20th – Edmonton International Airport, Alberta, Canada
The Sówka sisters and Olha waited for the Canadian Air Transport Security Authority screening officers to finish checking their documents and kit bags. Despite the paperwork, the officers were confused when they found three military uniforms.
“Why are you in Canada and not fighting in Ukraine?” asked the older officer. “Maybe these aren’t yours,” He glanced at their passports. “Since when were Polish women involved?”
“We are volunteer security personnel,” said Andżelika, indicating her sister. “Our pilot companion is Ukrainian and was wounded while serving with an all-female squadron.”
“We’re guests of Chayka Air in Cold Lake,” added Estera. “The documents should confirm everything.”
“If they’re not forged,” said the younger officer. “How do we know you’re not dangerous Russian spies?”
An intercom buzzed in their office. A minute later, a colleague came out and whispered something to the older man, and the officers all left the interrogation room.
“We must insist on calling Chayka Air,” said Olha. “I don’t understand why these officers refused?”
After a short wait, a different man came in and told them to follow. He led them to the main office, where a woman and a Canadian Air Force officer greeted them.
“I’m Aliona Sokol from Chayka Air, and my RCAF friend here is Lieutenant Colonel Todd Manning. These CATSA officers were being extra diligent due to an anonymous tip-off about foreign agents attempting to infiltrate via a flight from Warsaw. A scam call, perhaps?”
“When you didn’t appear on time, despite your Verified Traveller IDs,” added Todd. “I was forced to use my RCAF rank to inquire whether you were detained incorrectly. I also fear the threat may not be a hoax, so we’re investigating that.”
Once the CATSA officers returned all their documentation and apologised profusely, Aliona and Todd escorted Olha, Andżelika and Estera out into the central area of the terminal.
“How far is Cold Lake?” asked Olha. “It will be good to stop travelling… although it’s a change of pace for us.”
The trio of travellers smiled.
“Almost 200 miles, or about 320 kilometres,” replied Aliona. “But we’ll get there soon, and then you can relax until tomorrow. What time did you leave Chayka Field?”
“0700 on Thursday,” said Estera. “We needed enough time to catch today’s 0600 flight from Warsaw.”
“A long flight,” said Todd. “I saw you had a layover at Amsterdam Schiphol, which means over 15 hours in the air. Apologies for the next hop.”
They approached an area providing access to smaller private jets.
“In Chayka Air’s Phenom 100,” added Aliona. “It’s fast and comfortable, so we’ll get you to Cold Lake in plenty of time to recover before tomorrow afternoon’s itinerary.”
“Just don’t tell her mother, Kalyna,” said Todd. “She’s the latest Chayka pilot to graduate.”
“Although my brother Mykola is sure to tell… or dad.”
**
Saturday, December 21st – Chayka Air, Cold Lake, Alberta, Canada
Olha raced the Sówkas back to the guesthouse behind the Chayka Air hangars and administrative buildings. She might have won, but a shout from nearby made her stop.
“Hiya. Are you the three Ukrainians over here to raise funds for the war? I’m Mykola Sokol, son of your commander…well, one of your leaders. The other’s my aunt.”
The twenty-something boy leaning out of a window waved them over.
“I’m the only Ukrainian,” said Olha, putting her arms around the sisters. “My friends are Polish and support the squadron.”
“We coordinate the Night Owls,” said Andżelika. Providing security, medics, and K9 units for search and rescue, and guard duties. We’re after recruits while we’re here.”
Mykola glanced behind him before responding.
“I wanted to fight in 2022, but my parents claimed I wasn’t experienced. I haven’t learned to fly, like my sister Aliona, although she runs the company. I help when I can.” He looked round briefly. “I’m being called. Cya later.”
The trio dashed back to the guesthouse, knowing their first appointment was imminent.
*
Aliona showed the trio into the spacious hangar being set up for the fundraiser. Olha looked up as they passed under Zharptytsia, the prized Polikarpov U-2, the original Chayka sisters had escaped war-torn Europe in.
“Amazing and brave that they flew from Byelorussia so far across occupied territory to Sweden. Our Night Witch sisters, forever revered.”
1944 Polikarpov Po-2 of The Shuttleworth Collection, United Kingdom Michał Prokurat
The others nodded as Aliona led them onto the stage at the end of the hangar. Clodagh and Darina Kearney had set up an area for recording the next session of Kearney Encounter, their podcast. They directed the uniformed trio to seats in front of the main camera and microphones. Behind was a Ukrainian flag and the squadron’s Zharptytsia insignia.
“We’re pleased you three agreed to this,” said Clodagh, taking seats to the side with her sister. “This is not going out live since we will edit in footage from tonight’s fundraiser. So, you can take your time answering our questions. Okay?”
The interviewees smiled and agreed.
“Welcome, Kearney Encounter friends. Today’s podcast comes from Chayka Air, where their annual Fundraiser for Ukraine takes place,” said Darina, to a second camera covering the hostesses. “Every year since 2022, a few of the Night Witches squadron have attended the event to talk about the war and how we can help Ukraine achieve peace.”
Clodagh continued the introduction.
“This year’s guests, from left to right, are Lieutenant Olha Tkachuk, one of the squadron’s Ukrainian fighter pilots. In the centre is First Lieutenant Andżelika Sówka, co-founder of the Night Owls with her sister, First Lieutenant Estera Sówka, on the right. Before the sisters tell us about the Night Owls, I must ask Olha if she can talk about the squadron’s current operations?”
“I can, in general, although as some may have noticed, an injury postpones my return to active duty. However, I am aware of the missions my colleagues are flying. With the Russians launching almost nightly attacks at our cities, most night missions involve intercepting rockets and missiles. After many of these cowardly attacks hit civilian targets, our medevac helicopters respond, taking search and rescue teams to destroyed buildings. Our attack helicopters protect them… and often destroy the aerial threats too.”
“I presume the enemy uses drones to spot targets like runways,” said Clodagh. “So, your flights still move between airfields”
Olha winced while the Sówka sisters glanced at each other.
“The drones have increased steadily, especially since the summer.” She hesitated before adding, “I’ll leave the issue for the Night Owls to address.”
“Before that, are you willing to talk about your horrific drone experience, please?” asked Darina.
Olha closed her eyes but nodded.
“On July 13th, a group of Russian ORLAN 10 spy drones recced Myrhorod Air Base, minutes before Blue Flight landed. My wing sisters, Taisia Kovalchuk and Halyna Boyka, were killed, but I escaped my MiG-29, only for a cluster bomb to destroy it. The flying debris mangled my left arm…” She paused and bit her lip. “My arm was amputated.” She lowered her head. Then she rolled up the sleeve on her left arm. “It was replaced with this prosthesis at the Superhumans Center near Lviv. Only my flight leader, Adriana Pavlenko, survived the attack… physically unscathed.”
Andżelika put a comforting arm around the shaken pilot, who leant into her.
“A traumatic experience,” said Clodagh. “Our thanks for bravely sharing that. This is just one example of what the heroes in Ukraine can face any day, often every day.” She let the truth kindle the audience’s emotions. Then, she continued. “The Russian attacks continue, and not just on military targets in the East, but on cities across the country. The Night Witches must prepare for the likelihood of attacks on their airfield, and this is why the Night Owls were formed. Please, tell us what you can, Andżelika?”
Estera smiled encouragingly at her sister, who replied.
“Last summer, the squadron asked our uncle, Geralt Sówka, to form a trained security unit to replace the ground crews’ patrols. He recruited us and ten other female officers, all of us trained by GROM, the premier special missions unit of the Polish Armed Forces. We selected these space cadet blue uniforms, and Uncle G chose the Owl insignia for its powerful symbolism… and ‘sowa’ means owl in Polish.”
“And like owls, you operate predominantly at night,” said Darina. “Sorry. Please continue and explain the Ukraine angle.”
“Like the Night Witches, every recruit to the Night Owls swears allegiance to Ukraine, sharing the fight for freedom. We’re not just armed with guns, we’re also trained in unarmed conflict. Although our main recruits have been Ukrainian, we welcome other nationalities.”
“You are here with a purpose. Estera, please explain?” asked Clodagh.
Estera took a sip of water.
“The squadron’s defence plans require an enlarged squad, especially when some of us assist as medics with the medevac missions. We also operate six K9 units, which again serve on patrols and search & rescue missions. For example, Olha’s cousin, Anhelina Tkachuk and Quetzal, her red & white Siberian Husky, are one of our K9 units, specialising in search & rescue. The goal is to double the squad by recruiting security specialists, paramedics, and versatile K9 operatives.”
“Are you able to offer supplementary training?” asked Darina. “Or do they need to be fully trained?”
The Sówka sisters conferred before Andżelika replied.
“As long as they know the fundamentals, we have the personnel and facilities to instruct them further. We also have access to language facilities for anyone needing to brush up on their Ukrainian.”
Before anyone could say anything more, there was a commotion at the hangar entrance. Aliona rushed in, followed by her brother and a Chayka Air security guard with her Doberman Pinscher. All three had semi-automatic pistols as sidearms.
“There are six armed intruders on the airfield,” said the guard. “My colleagues are attempting to apprehend them.”
“We also alerted the Cold Lake RCMP detachment,” said Mykola. “Of course, Aliona warned the Canadian Forces Base as our neighbours.”
“Neighbours concerned about intruders after yesterday’s alert at Edmonton International. It’s wiser to be forewarned.”
Automatic gunfire echoed through the avenue of buildings. Colleagues called on the guard’s radio.
“Intruders heading your way, Tetyana. We’ll try to stop them. Secure the hangar immediately.”
As Mykola and his sister began to slide the hangar doors shut, Andżelika and Estera ran to help them. Tetyana dashed to a side room, shouting in what sounded like Canadian-Ukrainian.
“There should be other weapons in here. We might need them.”
“We keep some in that office… locked away,” Aliona said to the Sówka sisters. “I’m sure you two are more than proficient.”
As Olha joined them, Aliona led them to where Tetyana unlocked a hidden gun safe and took out three SIG Sauer P320s.
“Aliona, as Chayka Air’s CEO, can you authorise these three officers as security?” asked Tetyana in her Ukrainian dialect. “Since they’re from the Night Witches, they’re trained.”
When her employer nodded, Tetyana handed Olha, Estera and Andżelika the pistols. Then she radioed her colleagues.
“Zoriana, what’s your status? We now have six armed personnel, plus an eager Borago. Over.”
“They’ve split into two groups. One is preparing to blast the main hangar door… but the RCMP will deal with them. Steinarr is tracking the others, who are likely looking for a side entrance. Over.”
“Will prepare reception at rear. Over and out.”
Tetyana left Aliona, Mykola, and Olha covering the main door from a safe distance and dashed with her K9 and the Sówka sisters onto the stage.
The Kearneys and their two camera operators were filming the developing crisis.
“Shadow both groups. We must record this,” said Darina, dividing their team.
Down steps behind the stage were a narrow corridor and a large central steel door for bringing supplies or equipment into the hangar. Tetyana checked the handle, and the door swung inwards. Unable to lock it, she looked around.
A metal staircase at one end of the passageway went up to a gantry leading around the inside of the hangar. A small window gave a view from the gantry to the rear of the building.
Telling her K9 to stay, Tetyana climbed up to the window. She glanced through the dusty glass, then pulled away, gesturing down towards the door. She pointed to a pile of crates at the opposite end of the corridor.
Andżelika and Estera gave thumbs up and hid behind the crates, with a camera operator. Borago noted this and hid near the foot of the stairs, waiting as his owner crept down and lay beside him.
The door moved slightly, then swung open as three armed men slipped inside, rolling instinctively. Crouching, they scanned what must have seemed an empty corridor. Unaware they were being watched, but hearing voices, the trio moved towards the steps onto the stage.
Swiftly, Tetyana released her dog and fired a warning shot, which was followed by two from the crates. The intruders spun round, but Borago bowled them over as they tried to shoot.
Another dog entered the fray through the open doorway. The intruders found themselves surrounded by armed security guards and forced to the ground.
“Great timing, Zoriana,” said Tetyana. “I guessed Steinarr would be right behind them.” She bent down to where both Dobermanns were terrifying the prisoners. “She wasn’t going to let Borago have all the fun.”
As the male intruders stood, arms handcuffed behind them, one garbled something. Another shook his head to silence him, but not before Andżelika smiled.
“Too late. Some of us understand Russian.” She turned to the Chayka Air security guards. “He mentioned a third group already here.”
“The ones sent to neutralise our alarms,” said Zoriana. “Our military police colleagues caught them sneaking around. They’re interrogating them.”
“No doubt that bunch disabled this rear door, so I couldn’t lock it,” said Tetyana, escorting the first prisoner outside.
The handcuffed intruders were taken around the outside of the hangar to where the RCMP officers had secured three more intruders.
Aliona had escorted everyone else outside and appeared relieved that the Sówka group were safe.
“Lieutenant Colonel Manning has commandeered our securest room for Cold Lake’s Military Police to interrogate all three groups of intruders.”
“With our assistance,” added the senior RCMP officer. “You also have the use of one of our K9 officers, Corporal Isla Clacher.” He indicated a female handler with a German Shepherd. “She trained with your Douglass sisters before they found their Ukrainian roots.”
Tetyana and Zoriana grinned and then saluted both RCMP officers.
“Experienced officers have advised me,” said Aliona, “That the hangar needs to be thoroughly searched for explosive devices before our Fundraiser. Guests will start arriving in about two hours.”
“We’ll need more than three K9 units,” said Isla. “Even with human assistance.”
Before anyone could respond, two vehicles pulled up with K9 insignia, one Military Police, the other Air Transport Security. The handlers let their dogs out, then attached tactical gear and leashes to them.
“I’m Sergeant Corynn Amsel, and my German Shorthaired Pointer is Rikke,” said the Military Police handler.
“And my Beagle is Rosheen,” said the CATSA handler. “I’m Ailish… Ailish Delaney.”
Mykola turned to his sister, “Five K9 units from four units. How’s our CEO going to coordinate them?”
She smiled. “I’ll delegate to one of the Night Owl First Lieutenants.” She glanced from Andżelika to Estera. “They’re both experienced in leading a team which includes six K9 units from three countries. Does one of you Sówka sisters want to take charge… if our handlers accept?”
Estera encouraged her sister to step forward, saying, “Another chance to demonstrate teamwork.”
Cameras still rolling, five keen handlers gathered around Andżelika with their eager dogs.
“This will be a perfect example of the solidarity Ukraine needs,” said Aliona. “Ensuring our venue is secure for another extremely successful Fundraiser.”
Episode 39 of Freedom Flights picks up on a key discussion in the last episode.
I will continue trying to foreshadow future incidents without making my characters react as if they know what will happen in 2025… even if they fear what could happen. Also, I want each episode to tackle just crucial incidents in a specific month, thereby I hope to reach the present quicker. I don’t want to be stuck writing about earlier months when the last shot is fired.
Therefore, until a just and lasting peace for Ukraine is reached, I will continue to write more episodes. After then addressing the essential rebuilding, I must finish writing the pre-2022 growth of the Chayka Family and their aviation business based in Canada, Chayka Air.
We must never forget the brave people fighting for freedom, with too many losing their lives. Let’s pray Western aid and weapons continue to reach Ukraine, despite how some leaders vacillate. Assistance must arrive on time to change their fortunes and prepare for the genuine peace that must come soon.
I still worry about the Middle East conflict escalating, not only because it could threaten many of us globally, but also as it would shift the attention and support away from Ukraine. However, there are signs that Putin may be forced to treat peace negotiations seriously. Is peace finally achievable, or will someone lose interest again?
Links to the previous episodes can be found on my Freedom Flights page via the left-hand sidebar.
Episode 39 – Dispersal and Concealment
2024
Monday, November 4th – Squadron Command Centre, Chayka Field, Volyn Oblast, Ukraine
Eight of the squadron stalwarts had been invited by the Chayka Majors to meet in the Squadron Command Centre.
“Last month, we talked with a few of you about how the Russians continue to launch missiles, rockets, and drones incessantly almost every night, and often in the day,” said Kalyna. “Of course, they claim they’re targeting military objectives, despite hitting mainly civilian targets. Although this Oblast has not suffered the attacks other regions have, it’s our duty to respond to any attack we can, so we have sent out flights regularly.”
“However, every time we launch a response,” continued Vasy, “We draw attention to this base. So far, we have managed to remain hidden behind a veneer of abandoned buildings, camouflage, by using deception and rotating aircraft to other bases. We’ve been lucky enough to avoid detection… but we can’t depend on that. Plus, Volyn Oblast and Lutsk are vulnerable at any time, so we need to prepare for the Russians’ attention to turn here.”
“We’ve called you here to help develop a defensive strategy that ensures our jets and helicopters survive,” added Kalyna. “But also ensures we can respond effectively when the region is attacked. We’re sure you all have invaluable suggestions.”
Everyone nodded but hesitated from offering the first idea.
However, Chief Warrant Officer Janina Patriksson offered the initial observation.
“From the maintainer and ground crew perspective, there are disadvantages already when aircraft leapfrog between bases when they’re not hidden here. Except when they land at Dęblin, they’re not always secured, maintained, or re-armed. That’s unsurprising, especially as many of our crafts are unique to this squadron. Building reinforced hangars must be costly.”
“Could we equip another base with our spare parts?” asked Kapitan Adriana Pavlenko. “Or are we short? Fortunately, F-16s are unable to land here. But we must be maintaining visiting MiGs.”
“Only MiGs land here,” replied Janina. “And we can help where needed. The problem is the shortage of specific parts. We only have enough of those to equip our maintainers in Dęblin.”
“More parts we can source and bring in via Poland,” said Vasy. “UAF is building hangars on airfields further east, but this field is low priority, for now. So, we’ve enquired about materials to erect reinforced hangars ourselves. But they are so expensive that we would need to turn to our Canadian and other foreign supporters. Or look at alternatives.”
She nodded at Kalyna, who brought up various photos of different hangars and aircraft dispersals on the central command screen and talked about them.
“Hardened hangars would prove exorbitant, so here are examples of alternatives, such as Kevlar-lined deployable shelters, which Chayka Air are investigating. We have already begun using roads as runways and dispersing the jets under the trees and camouflage netting. Our strategy must develop from here.”
“Until we erect any kind of hangar, we need to have effective airfield defences,” said Kapitan Mariyka Shevchuk. “We’ll keep upgrading our own interceptor drones and increasing the number. Crucially, Saab provided us with their Mobile Short-Range Air Defence system, which is designed to identify and counter a wide range of air threats, including those from fighter jets, armed helicopters, missiles, and rockets, as well as UAVs and loitering munitions. But the MSHORAD could struggle if we come under a concerted swarm attack. We need another self-propelled air defence solution as back-up.”
Vasy switched the projected images on the command screen to a couple of such defensive platforms.
“As long as we have the MSHORAD and we are not attacked as regularly as more vulnerable places, we are not deemed as under immediate threat. However, we are trying to obtain either of these with the assistance of our UAF advocates. You will all recognise the Gepard, which Germany has supplied dozens of to Ukraine, so one more shouldn’t stretch the Bundeswehr. The other option is a self-propelled anti-aircraft version of the CV90, which is produced by the Anglo-Swedish BAE Systems AB, and is designed to connect to Sweden’s air defence network. Since last summer, Ukraine has been using 50 CV9040C armoured combat vehicles at the front, which were sent by Sweden.”
“Slovakia and the Czech Republic are also assisting this country’s CV90 programme,” added Kalyna. “In September last year, Ukraine and Sweden agreed on a joint production, mentioning 1,000 vehicles as a goal. Denmark and the Netherlands have since got involved. So, arranging for one AA model seems achievable and would probably integrate with the Swedish-built Saab MSHORAD, also designed to connect with a defence network.”
Ukrainian military got CV-90 IFVs in the summer of 2023 / Photo credit: ArmyInform
Murmurs of agreement greeted this strategy.
“Going back to dispersal,” said Kapitan Anzhela Havrylyuk. “Are there stretches of road we should check out? If we’re using the Swedish BAS 90 system as our guide, we must establish the dispersed locations and rotate around them.”
“And as we’ve proved,” said Kapitan Aleks Górski. “Helicopters are a fast means to set these up. Once those outlying dispersal points are established, they would reduce our need to supply other airfields with Gripen-specific spares, reducing flight times.”
Her Tiger colleague, Kapitan Nadia Lysenko, nodded in agreement and added, “Our longest regular flights would be to Dęblin… around 290 kilometres. Although all the airfields nearby are closer, we have mechanics and parts already at Dęblin. Plus, fuel, which, other than threatened domestic sources, our allies are supplying to the UAF… via Poland. Obviously, our ground crew here would be able to service the BAS 90 style locations.”
“Often setting up hidden camps instead of returning here,” said Janina. “We should arrange for security to patrol in those areas. We need to recruit more personnel, including K9 units for security as well as their usual rescue work.”
Kalyna changed the displayed photos of the Gepard and CV90 to a list of steps – CAMOUFLAGE, DECEPTION, SPARE PARTS, DEPLOYABLE SHELTERS, SELF-PROPELLED AIR DEFENCE, DISPERSAL & BAS 90, PERSONNEL.
“Should I add anything?”
“Whenever any of us travels to and from Poland, we can still be attacked,” said Capitaine Aline Bonheur. “Even more so for anything being brought in by land. That’s a vulnerable area… all along the border zone that Ukraine depends on.”
Beside her, Kapitan Maryna Sobol agreed, adding, “There needs to be air exclusion zones over unoccupied Ukraine, especially to aid access across the border. If only our NATO allies could target incoming missiles and rockets that threatened their airspace. Debris from attacks has already fallen on NATO territory.”
Although it was after 2300 when Jane Wetherby and Carita Forsström came into the Zvenigora, the restaurant was crowded. Everyone not on night duty wanted to learn more about the consequences of the upset in the U.S election. A sense of dejection pervaded the base, as sixteen hours earlier, it became clear that Donald Trump had regained the White House overnight in a stunning political comeback, winning the election to become the 47th U.S President.
“Not the result Ukraine wanted,” said Aaron Garcia to Jane and Carita as they sat beside him. “Can Trump deliver a just peace for Ukraine in 24 hours after entering the White House?”
“First, it depends if it’s a priority for him,” said Carita. “We’ll know more over the next eleven weeks, and by what he prioritises in his inauguration speech. Moldovans held firm against Russian interference and re-elected pro-Western President Maia Sandu for a second term. So, second, Trump needs to stand strong against Putin.”
“Let’s pray he carries out what he needs to,” said Jane. “Hopefully, the media and the elected members will hold him to that.”
“And the Democrats,” added Aaron as the voice of a TV reporter announced that the Democratic candidate, Vice President Kamala Harris, was about to make a speech on the campus of Howard University.
The restaurant went quiet, all eyes on the movie screen showing a US news channel. The viewers were as subdued as the supporters gathered to hear Harris speak.
“I know many people feel like we’re entering a dark time,” she said. “But for the benefit of us all, I hope that’s not the case.”
The three journalists glanced at each other, and then Jane closed her eyes as if implying darkness… for her at least.
Harris tried to give a concession speech flavoured with optimism.
“My heart is full today, full of gratitude,” she continued. “Hear me when I say the light of America’s promise will always burn bright.”
Although there were no Americans in the restaurant, most watching expressed a hope that the U.S promise of support would remain. Harris continued to be positive.
“We will never give up the fight for our democracy, the rule of law, of the rule of justice and the sacred idea that everyone of us, no matter who we are or where we start out, have certain fundamental rights and freedoms that must be upheld. We will continue to wage this fight.”
Carita whispered to her colleagues, “She must encourage her audience and give us hope. But from here on, it’s going to be hard for the Democrats. Let’s pray that the outgoing administration will manage to give Ukraine as much as they can.”
“Trump will start pushing his agenda from today onwards,” said Aaron. “Europe is watching intently to see what happens next. Does Trump have the balls to end the war in January? Or will the rest of NATO be left to carry on the fight alone?
150617-N-NT265-182 YOKOSUKA, Japan (June 17, 2015) – Master-at-Arms 3rd Class Kelsey Carlton, from Clearwater, Fla., assigned to Military Working Dog unit at Fleet Activities Yokosuka, conducts obstacle course training with military working dog Donci. The canines with the unit are used to apprehend suspects, detect explosives and narcotics while searching buildings, ships and submarines. (U.S. Navy photo by Mass Communication Specialist 2nd Class Christian Senyk/Released)
First Lieutenants Andżelika and Estera Sówka found Katiuska Rebeca Meléndez exercising Treka, her Siberian Husky, around the agility course, watched by their Spanish fans. The Sówka sisters persuaded Rebeca to sit in a shady and secluded spot to talk.
“Have you thought about our discussion on Tuesday?” asked Estera. “Are you and Treka still willing to do security patrols and search & rescue work as one of our K9 units?”
“We are aiming to recruit more K9 units,” added Andżelika. “Monday’s defence meeting made recruitment a priority, so we don’t have only six K9s covering two roles.”
“That’s why we’re practising more defensive exercises and by the weekend we can be tested… if my amigas agree,” replied Rebeca. “We still prefer rescuing people.”
They rejoined her friends, who were looking at Capitán Conchita Gutiérrez’s phone.
“Does this mean the war might end in a few months?” asked Jacinta Garcia. “Or is my brother right to distrust Donald Trump?”
“I trust Aaron’s opinion of Trump,” said Conchita. “If Trump’s team suggest he’ll delay Kyiv’s NATO membership for at least 20 years in exchange for continued arms supplies, that’s a warning. Any peace deal will have conditions unacceptable to Ukraine.”
“This article from today’s The Kyiv Independent implies more,” added her co-pilot, Teniente Adelita Palomo. “Any peace deal could see the front line frozen wherever it is.”
“That could mean Ukraine losing territory,” added Aitana Salcedo, who was stroking Treka with Rebeca, who concluded, “Meaning Russia wins and gains stolen land.”
Another month has passed, so it’s time for another Insecure Writer’s Support Group post, and an opportunity to plan another writing adventure.
First, it’s almost two months since I submitted my Snowdon Shadows police procedural, Fevered Fuse, to London-based publisher Joffe Books, and I’m still waiting for an answer. I’m beginning to suspect a rejection is awaiting me when the three-month deadline is reached in early August. At least I’m checking out other publishers by listening to a few of their authors’ books,
However, as I wait, I’m distracting myself by working on draft 6 of ‘Fates Maelstrom’, the second book in my Snowdon Shadows series. This revision primarily involves changing the POVs from multiple 3rd Person to Sparkle Anwyl’s 1st person, an interesting challenge as Sparkle isn’t in every scene.
I have yet to write another episode of my Ukraine saga, Freedom Flights. The last one was Eagle’s Flight, and the next is provisionally called ‘Dispersal and Concealment’, and picks up on something discussed in Eagle’s Flight. Obviously, I’m also still following the news from Ukraine.
Slava Ukraini
Heroiam slava!
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July 2 question – Is there a genre you haven’t tried writing in yet that you really want to try? If so, do you plan on trying it?
This may be hypothetical for me, given that I have so many drafts to revise. There are also others that I must accept as remaining abandoned. Most of those to revise fall under the Crime & Mystery genre, although there is one that would be classed as Science Fantasy, Gossamer Flames. Also, Freedom Flights starts in 1944, and although the current episodes are Present Day, it would be classified as Historical Fiction… especially if I keep developing the 1944-2014 chapters.
However, I have written Fantasy and Science Fiction stories, an Alternative History, and a few Children’s short pieces, all of which are unlikely to be revised. I even started a Romance novel on the international tennis circuit. Checking out genre lists, such as Reedsy’s The Ultimate List of Book Genres: 35 Popular Genres, Explained, or Wikipedia’s List of writing genres, I realise there are quite a few genres I’ve missed attempting.
Two stand out: Horror and Erotica. A few of my shorts have had horrific elements, and one reviewer of Spiral of Hooves was unable to finish reading because of the “sexual scenes”.
Time to attempt writing an Erotic Horror… featuring a female vampire with strange fetishes. Or is that a ‘miss-stake’?
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Episode 38 of Freedom Flights sees the return to Chayka Field of an unexpected supporter with some new recruits, and who is met by a character who will remain forever. There’s also a hint or two about events in the next episode.
I will continue trying to foreshadow future incidents without making my characters react as if they know what will happen in 2025.
Until a just and lasting peace for Ukraine is reached, I will continue to write more episodes, never forgetting the brave people fighting for freedom, with too many losing their lives. Let’s pray Western aid and weapons continue to reach the country, despite what some leaders threaten. Assistance must arrive on time to change their fortunes and prepare for the genuine peace that must come soon.
Each day, I worry about the Middle East conflict escalating, not only because it could threaten many of us globally, but also as it would shift the attention and support away from Ukraine, when peace negotiations could be achievable.
Links to the previous episodes can be found on my Freedom Flights page via the left-hand sidebar.
Teniente Adelita Palomo grinned as she finished reading on her cellphone and handed it to her friend, Capitán Conchita Gutiérrez.
“Check out your guy’s feature on Ukrainian medevacs in Vuelo del Águila. As you expected, it’s excellent, and he suggests that readers with expertise volunteer, especially those who speak Ukrainian.”
To ensure best access to patients, the CH-146 cabin is configured to cross-load stretchers. Chris Thatcher Photo
Conchita took the phone and checked out the article by Aaron Garcia.
“As you say, ‘excellent’ and accurate. Not only does he mention the Night Witches, but he also sneaks us in by mentioning ‘the defensive role of Tiger Charlie flown by pilot, Capitán Gutiérrez & her co-pilot, Teniente Palomo’. We need to make a translation from Spanish for everyone else.”
She waved Major Kalyna Chayka over and explained the invaluable coverage to her and their plan to translate it.
“Good idea,” said Kalyna, after she’d scanned the piece. “I only know enough Spanish to now want to read your translation. Let me have it as soon as you can, and we’ll ensure everyone can see it. And not just our medevac team.”
“A couple in the squadron understand Spanish,” said Adelita. “We’ll let them know so they can spread the news.”
Shortly after Kalyna returned to the group she had come from, Mariyka Shevchuk announced the evening’s film from beside the restaurant’s screen.
“Tonight, we are screening two documentaries from the Ukrainian director, Alisa Kovalenko, starting with ‘We Will Not Fade Away’, a study of five Ukrainian teens and their brief escape from war on an expedition to the Himalayas. Filming took three years from 2019, mainly in Donbas, until the Russian invasion changed everything. Alisa went to fight on the front lines for four months before completing this documentary, then turned new footage from the frontlines into the film ‘My Dear Theo’, a video diary for her young son, which is our second screening after a brief interval.”
Mariyka paused before continuing, “ In 2023, Alisa said the first documentary ‘is not about the expedition, it’s not about the mountains or adventure therapy, it’s actually about the power of dreams and how you can still believe in your dreams when you are living in this kind of depressing place that isn’t very friendly to you and isn’t helping you to realise your goals. But you keep believing, and you put a lot of light in the middle of the darkness”.
The lights dimmed, and ‘We Will Not Fade Away’ started.
Monday, October 21st – Diplomatic Academy of Ukraine, Kyiv, Ukraine
The room in the Academy was packed for the speech by US Defence Secretary Lloyd Austin, who was visiting Ukraine for the fourth time. This visit was crucial amid some Russian battlefield gains and with the imminent US election in two weeks. Everyone was aware that if Donald Trump were elected president, he had already suggested that he would be more reluctant than President Biden to continue to support Ukraine, as he had promised to end the war swiftly, potentially on terms favourable to Moscow. This would deprive Kyiv of its most powerful military and financial backer.
Five of the Night Witches’ supportive journalists were seated together near the rear behind all the university students, professors, and government representatives.
“Can Lloyd Astin reassure Ukrainians that the US will continue its support?” asked Darina Kearney. “Or are his hands tied?”
“I’d guess the impending election will temper what he says,” said her sister, Clodagh, co-host of the Canadian podcast Kearney Encounter.
“Most likely,” added Jane Wetherby, with her Anglo-Canadian perspective. “However, I believe he’ll make veiled references to ongoing US support.”
“While praising the ongoing bravery and ingenuity of Ukrainians,” concluded Carita Forsström, reporting for Swedish Aero News.
Some late arrivals sneaked in quietly, including a familiar but unexpected colleague. Spanish journalist Aaron Garcia noticed and managed to obtain a seat next to them.
“I’ll explain later why I’m back in Ukraine… after Lloyd Austin has spoken.”
Hennadii Nadolenko, the Director of the Academy, introduced the US Defence Secretary, who then began his speech, thanking the Director and others who had made his visit possible. He said he would talk about Ukraine’s just war of self-defence and the road ahead, telling those who doubted the truth behind the struggle to ‘come to Kyiv’.
He continued by saying one must not forget how the war began.
“For years, Putin had harassed and assaulted the independent nation-state of Ukraine. On February 24, 2022, Putin crossed the line into an all-out invasion. And the Kremlin started the largest war in Europe since World War II. Now, Putin’s war of choice poses fundamental questions to every government and every person who seeks a decent and secure world.”
After posing and answering the questions, Lloyd Austin emphasised the importance of America and allies in supporting Ukraine against Russian aggression, with clear results as he explained.
“Now, this invasion hasn’t gone the way that the Kremlin planned. After 970 days of war, Putin has not achieved one single strategic objective. Not one. President Zelenskyy didn’t flee. Kyiv didn’t fall. And Ukraine didn’t fold.”
The five colleagues nodded as he addressed the immense price Russia had paid, especially in terms of lives. But he also emphasised the cruel cost for Ukraine.
“Now, Ukraine has suffered terribly at Putin’s hands. Since February 2022, according to the U.N., Russian forces have killed more than 11,000 Ukrainian civilians in verified civilian casualty incidents. And that includes more than 600 children. The U.N. says that Putin’s forces have bombed more than 250 Ukrainian schools and hospitals. And they’ve wrecked treasured sites of Ukrainian history, culture, and memory. But the Kremlin’s malice has not broken Ukraine’s spirit. Ukraine stands unbowed — and strengthened.”
When he finished describing Ukrainian resistance, and added that, “Ukraine’s defenders have brought inspiration to the world — and glory to Ukraine”, the audience responded enthusiastically.
‘Slava Ukraini!’
Once the shouts of the salute had died down, Lloyd Austin spoke about what America and the coalition of 50 countries in the Ukraine Defence Contact Group were doing to oppose Putin’s aggression.
“For anyone who thinks that American leadership is expensive — well, consider the price of American retreat,” he said after talking about the 58 billion dollars spent since February 2022. “In the face of aggression, the price of principle is always dwarfed by the cost of capitulation. Our allies and partners know that. And I’ve been proud to watch the pro-Ukraine coalition dig deep.”
Knowing how the Night Witches were themselves a coalition of various nationalities, the five colleagues nodded in agreement, especially as Austin outlined the support from various countries.
He emphasised the urgency of the situation, culminating in adding, “I know that the Kremlin’s war is a nightmare from which the Ukrainian people are trying to awake. But we should all understand that Putin’s assault is a warning. It is a sneak preview of a world built by tyrants and thugs — a chaotic, violent world carved into spheres of influence; a world where bullies trample their smaller neighbors; and a world where aggressors force free people to live in fear.”
As Jane Wetherby had predicted, the Defence Secretary explained America’s position.
“And make no mistake. The United States does not seek war with Russia. And even as Putin makes profoundly reckless and dangerous threats about nuclear war, we will continue to behave with the responsibility that the world rightly demands of a nuclear-armed state.
So, the United States will uphold our sworn NATO obligations. The United States will defend every inch of NATO territory. And the United States will get Ukraine what it needs to fight for its survival and security.”
The audience applauded, and when the clapping subsided, he focused on the central defenders, saying, “Ukraine does not belong to Putin. Ukraine belongs to the Ukrainian people. And Moscow will never prevail in Ukraine.”
Building to a fitting climax.
“Ukraine has chosen the course of courage. And so have we. My friends, you walk a hard road. But you do not walk it alone. Thank you. God bless you. And may God bless all who fight to defend freedom.”
Lloyd Austin’s speech was received with a standing ovation and enthusiastic cheering.
*
After obtaining some additional interviews with key participants, the five journalists found a coffee shop near the Academy. Once they had drinks and snacks, they found a table where they could discuss Lloyd Austin’s address.
Ukrainian President Volodymyr Zelensky welcomes US Defense Secretary Lloyd Austin before their meeting in Kyiv on October 21, 2024. Ukrainian Presidential Press Service/Reuters
“A welcome contribution, but it won’t relieve our Ukrainian forces’ needs during a drawn-out conflict on multiple fronts,” replied Clodagh Kearney. “Darina and I will analyse that in our next podcast.”
Her sister nodded and then added, “Kearney Encounter will be expected to express an opinion before the election… probably live from Kyiv. If any of you would like to be guests, our followers would find your viewpoint fascinating.”
At first, nobody volunteered, but they all nodded in agreement. After a silence filled with drinking and munching, Carita Forsström spoke up.
“It would make a change for me. Count on my appearance. It offers me a different challenge from writing online articles for Swedish Aero News. Normally, I can perfect the pieces before submitting. And recording Austin’s presentation gives me time to assess what he said.”
“You mean like this quote,” said Jane, playing an extract:
‘America’s security demands that we stand up to Putin’s aggression. Ukraine matters to U.S. security for four blunt reasons. Putin’s war threatens European security. Putin’s war challenges our NATO allies. Putin’s war attacks our shared values. And Putin’s war is a frontal assault on the rules-based international order that keeps us all safe.’
“Exactly,” said Carita. “That alone answers all those who question why the West must support Ukraine.”
“Too many politicians spout Russia’s lies,” said Aaron Garcia. “That’s what I was trying to do with my Spanish readers. As a result of my first article, there were invaluable responses. I’m going to Poland tomorrow but will return shortly… possibly to our favourite squadron.”
Everyone grinned, and Jane said, “I will probably see you there then, as I’m going to that base with Carita. When we were told, ‘Ukrainian factories are now pumping out some of the best UAVs in the world, and experienced Ukrainian air defenders are protecting their forces and their families,’ I remembered our innovative and brave Night Witches.”
**
Saturday, October 26th – Chayka Field, Volyn Oblast, Ukraine
Sergeant Marusya Dudziarz drove the base’s minibus around to the rear of the main building. Her four passengers climbed out and were greeted by First Lieutenants Andżelika and Estera Sówka, and Chief Paramedic Osinniy.
Aaron Garcia embraced the trio before introducing his three compatriots.
“As emailed to you, Andżelika, these Spanish ladies are the volunteers for the Night Witches.” In turn, he introduced them: “Katiuska Rebeca Meléndez and her K9, Treka, are an experienced search and rescue team. Aitana Salcedo and Jacinta Garcia are qualified paramedics. There were three male volunteers, so I found them a posting with your former battalion, Osinniy.”
“Smart move,” said the Chief Paramedic. “Especially if they’re experienced.”
“The majors said to meet in the canteen,” said Marusya. “There may be others there, not on duty… like those back from dawn patrols.”
*
Lieutenant Polina Moroz was waiting for Marusya when they arrived in the canteen.
“Was driving the bus a relaxing change from co-piloting our Tiger?”
“No way. Lutsk gets busy when the train from Poland gets in. Flying there’s no aerial traffic, unless you count Russian missiles and drones on the night shift.”
Everyone chuckled.
Aaron noted that the Chayka majors had entered and were gesturing at a large table that was free.
“Do you want to join us, Marusya… Polina?”
“No thanks,” said Polina. “We need to eat quickly and then run our pre-flight checks before this evening’s patrol.”
The others joined Kalyna and Vasy at the large table, and Aaron introduced the new volunteers as they sat down.
“You’ve done us proud, Aaron,” said Kalyna. “We shouldn’t be surprised after your inspirational article in Vuelo del Águila.”
Jacinta hugged him enthusiastically, kissing him on the cheeks.
At that moment, Capitán Conchita Gutiérrez appeared in the doorway with her co-pilot Teniente Adelita Palomo. Conchita glowered at Aaron as he kissed the younger woman.
She stormed over and slapped Aaron. Then she turned to Jacinta and screamed.
“Who are you to be molesting my man. You didn’t expect me to turn up so soon…”
“I’m his sister, Jacinta… and a volunteer paramedic. You must be the fearless Conchita. My brother talks about you all the time.”
The pilot looked stunned and unsure how to respond. Aaron saved her by explaining.
“Judged understandably by my past behaviour. Please, trust me next time and believe when I say this is my only sister. Our other siblings are all macho brothers.” He turned to the majors. “Any key developments since I left last month?”
The cousins glanced at each other, and Vasy answered.
“On the day you left, Thursday, September 26th, Nadia Lysenko escaped from Kursk with Dasha Isakova in a captured Russian fighter jet. Another French helicopter pilot with Ukrainian ancestry, Lieutenant Cateline Ivanova, joined us. Otherwise, the training on NATO jets continues at Dęblin in Poland-”
“And the Russians continue to launch missiles, rockets, and drones incessantly almost every night, and often in the day,” added Kalyna. “Of course, they claim they’re targeting military objectives, despite hitting mainly civilian targets. Meanwhile, we need to develop our defensive strategy. Our jets can only leapfrog between bases when they’re not hidden here.”
Jane Wetherby and Carita Forsström came into the canteen, chatting to some ground crew. They left their chat when they saw the Spanish gathering and headed over.
“Now we understand, Aaron, why you came here via Poland,” said Jane. “At least, you seem to be justified in not joining us for the Kearney Encounter.”
He allowed the volunteers to introduce themselves after he’d told them who Jane and Carita worked for.
As the canteen filled with pilots and ground crew, many came over to thank Aaron for the article in Vuelo del Águila, which had been translated into Ukrainian and English. Nadia Lysenko and Aleks Górski were among the last and pulled up chairs to join the group.
“I’m so glad you made it back, Nadia,” said Aaron. “I worried about you and the others in Kursk when the rumours about ruthless North Koreans arriving in Russia began to circulate.”
“I only encountered vicious Russians,” replied Nadia. “However, Ukrainian military intelligence officially proved the rumours as fact on Wednesday. The first North Korean soldiers should be deployed in Kursk Oblast over this weekend.”
“I pray our forces continue to hold ground captured around Sudzha,” said Aleks. “We need the ongoing morale boost in the current climate.”
Everyone agreed in gestures and words. Then the Spanish recruits discussed their duties with the officers while the journalists aired their fears about the November 5th U.S. presidential vote.
“I fear the former Republican president, Donald Trump, being re-elected,” said Jane. “From both a Canadian and a European perspective, he proved dangerous in his first term.”
“It’s proving to be a closer race than expected,” said Aaron. “Even after President Biden withdrew, making Vice President Kamala Harris the Democratic candidate. After hearing their Defence Secretary lay out the Administration’s strategy for Ukraine, her election should be best for Ukraine and Europe.”
“Especially as Trump was antagonistic towards NATO last time, calling it ‘obsolete’. He might be claiming to end this war in 24 hours, but in whose favour?” asked Carita. “Moscow’s? Russia is already interfering in our elections. Will Moldova keep its pro-West president on November 3rd? Will Trump be inaugurated in January?
“He blames NATO countries for expecting the US to defend them,” said Jane. “Although some of those, such as Britain, Canada, Germany, Poland, and France, fought alongside the US in the Global War on Terrorism.”
“That was a global military campaign started by the Republican Bush Administration following the September 11 attacks in 2001,” said Nadia. “I had friends from the French forces in Afghanistan, some of whom lost friends, even partners. Let’s pray this war doesn’t escalate… although the casualties are already too horrific.”
The table went quiet, and the silence spread as everyone knew someone who had given their life for Ukraine’s peace and freedom.
It’s time for another Insecure Writer’s Support Group post, and an opportunity to reflect on the dawn of my book adventure.
First, it’s just a month since I submitted my Snowdon Shadows police procedural, Fevered Fuse, to London-based publisher Joffe Books. Not surprisingly, I’m still waiting for the publisher to answer. I’ve yet to start rewriting ‘Fates Maelstrom’, the second book in my Snowdon Shadows series, but I have written another episode of my Ukraine saga, Freedom Flights – Strategy and Tactics.
Slava Ukraini
Heroiam slava!
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June 4 question – What were some books that impacted you as a child or young adult?
My distant memory of books I read in my childhood throws up a few titles that have endured.
Initially, I had to research Fingerling, whom I vaguely recalled was a gnome in the illustrations. Actually, his original name is Pinkeltje, and he’s “a fictional character from the eponymous children’s book series by the Dutch writer Dick Laan. Pinkeltje is a white-bearded gnome and wears a pointed hat and is as big as a pinky finger, hence his name, meaning “fingerling” (literally “little pinky”) in Dutch.” I’m unsure how many English translations of the original twenty-nine books my parents bought for my siblings and me, but I remember enjoying a few.
However, I vividly remember devouring The Story of Ferdinand (1936), “the best-known work by the American author Munro Leaf. Illustrated by Robert Lawson…” This wonderful children’s book tells “the story of a bull who would rather smell flowers than fight in bullfights. He sits in the middle of the bull ring, failing to take heed of any of the provocations of the matador and others to fight.” I adored the illustrations and the story even more, especially as the ending felt perfect, and it probably had an impact on my storytelling. I’m certain the fact that my Chilean grandmother had a Pekinese called Ferdie, aka Ferdinand, added to the appeal. Perhaps, he was named after the bull.
As I recall my childhood, there are other books, like A.A. Milne’s stories, especially those about Winnie the Pooh, many of Beatrix Potter’s stories, and another favourite, The Happy Lion, which I received on my birthday, being a Leo. This 1954 children’s picture book by Louise Fatio, illustrated by Roger Duvoisin, “follows a Happy Lion in France who, after escaping the small zoo where he lives, is surprised that people, who loved visiting him there, are now scared of him.”
I still have one of the books that I read and loved as a child, George Brooksbank’s ‘Old Mr Fox’. With a cover by celebrated Scottish wildlife artist Archibald Thorburn, this was my father’s copy, which he was given in 1932 for Christmas, the same year the book was published. This treasured book inspired me to write my first short story… about a fox running free.
C.S. Lewis’s The Chronicles of Narniafed my passion for fantasy, which became the first genre I embraced in my writing. I read all the books in the series, some numerous times, and again, I still have the set. Lewis was the first of the Inklings, whose works I read fervently. Two more were later discoveries.
I could list other books I read as a child, but none were truly influential until, in my teens, I added Science Fiction to my reading addiction. The authors included Isaac Asimov, Arthur C. Clarke, Robert Heinlein, Douglas Adams, Philip J. Farmer, Harry Harrison, Karl Vonnegut, Frank Herbert, Harry Harrison, Poul Anderson, …and the list goes on. Imagine my surprise when I found Anne McCaffrey’s Dragonriders of Pern series crossed from engrossing fantasy into space, and became gripping Science Fiction.
Inkling three would be Owen Barfield, but not until I was in my twenties. Before then, though, for me, there was only one masterful Inkling.
My favourite author, even now, is J.R.R. Tolkien, whom I first discovered when I read his essay based on his lecture “Beowulf: The Monsters and the Critics“. So, reading “The Hobbit” and “The Lord of the Rings” came a few months later. I read the whole of “The Lord of the Rings” over one very long weekend when I was at Eton College in 1969, age 16. I still have the three hardback copies with their detailed fold-out maps.
Although most of these books had some influence on my writing, Tolkien’s works had a much greater impact. Ironically, my first effective creative writing teacher, the poet and writer Roger Woddis, said my writing was becoming ‘purple prose’ as I wanted to imitate Tolkien. Fortunately, I restrained myself from writing ‘purple prose’ while improving. I also read more books as I grew older. But that’s another chapter.
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